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HelplessTriangle


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More please, this is getting good:scootangel:

I have no words....:twilightoops:

(Joke) Alt. Title: (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: Big Mac And Braeburn Get Ready To Rumble

1955414
i'm curious: do you read these stories before posting, or do you just make up alternate titles and leave
just curious

1955731
Door #2: I just make 'em up and leave. This is actually the third time I've used (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: The first time was on Something Extra and the second was on Sweet Apple Aches.

1955411
Because it sucks or because you liked it?:duck:

this....this is something....yeah something:ajsmug:

W>>1955907

Well, I'm not a clopper...

BUT! That was funny as hell! So because I liked it.

Not going to lie.
I laughed myself stupid.
I don't know why...
>Like

More please! AJs increasingly trauatized mind is fun!:pinkiecrazy:

Lawl, this definitely needs a second chapter! :rainbowlaugh:

more of this i wana see where this goes! XD

:rainbowlaugh: PLease write more. THis is hilarious.

LMFAO FROM START TO FINISH please continue:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::raritystarry:

Huh... haven't read this nor do I plan to but with the reviews...
Curiosity killed the cat.
Uh before I read this can someone tell me if it gets... discriptive... between the two?
It WILL be make or break for me. I am willing to give this a shot if its... subtle.
I don't have anything against homosexuality, but its not my cup of tea.
I await anyones response with mixed emotions. :duck:

1962598
Compared to what I usually write (on other sites), it's not very descriptive at all. I tried to keep it somewhat subtle. It's told from Applejack's point of view, and everything is basically implied from what she hears from outside the barn. And there are a few brief images that pop into her head that I wouldn't really call 'descriptive', but they're not really subtle either.

I hope that helps.:twilightsmile:

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Herm.
I... suposse I could... give it a go.
Hell, I enjoy this enough, you will have another fan.
I enjoy helping out authors that write enjoyable stories with comments and feedback.
*Deep breath* Here we go...
Edit to follow.

That was...
different.
But, it dose seem funny. Damnit, I'm going to have to keep reading.

1962785
I'm glad you at least enjoyed it a little. And thanks for the comments.:twilightsmile:

I have to warn you though, the next chapter I'm writing right now gets a little more descriptive.

1962859
So be it. I guess I resolved to be more open-minded.
Damn you New Years. Oh well, I look forward to updates. :twilightsmile:

*Wispers to self*
My girlfriend would never let me hear the end of this if she found out... :twilightsheepish:

Well this has potential.

I like how at this point they still could be doing something perfectly innocuous

Chapter 2...
I'm looking forward to AND dreading this.
Edit to follow, standby...

Poor, poor AJ. Just... poor AJ.
While short chapters kinda erk me, this was pretty funny.
Mabey Rainbow made that cloud Applejack saw... it would make sense and ya'll know it.

Well, that clears things up.
Not that it was ever in question, that is.
Ya know, the somewhat-incestuous-occurrences.
Unquestionable now. :eeyup:
>mfw dat end

I like it, yes its goo short but its funny and there is some great setup coming.:scootangel:

Short, cute and kinda funny-
I think there's potential here, it's easy to read and easy to imagine what's going on, the dialog Applejack overhears feels natural and nondescript enough that it feels - well, natural, and I'm a sucker for dialog. And, it was kind of sexy~
Fun stuff!

I can't get enough of this, more please!

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I swear, this had better not be another Big MacxBraeburn fic.

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2053499 Quite honestly, that comment was unneeded and came off quite rude. If you don't like the pair then exit out of the story and don't comment.

2053499
What did you think it was going to be?

2053716
WELL... When I clicked on it and before the page loaded, I thought it would be a TwilightxTrixie clopfic, or a Babs SeedxAJ or Babs SeedxBig Mac or even a Babs Seedx AB clopfic, but not this^.
I don't hate this pairing, it's just that Braeburn is NOT the only pony that Big Mac can be shipped with, and yet I see almost nothing(not necessarily on this site) but Big Mac shipped with Braeburn. A nice Big MacxCheerilee fic would be good. Why no Cheerilee love?

2056269
Twilight and Trixie...?
Next time actually look at the description and what characters are in it before you start making random assumptions and setting up impossible expectations...

2056335
I thought of this BEFORE THE PAGE FINISHED LOADING! The Title can mean that Twilight and Trixie have a reunion and it somehow turns sexy. It is called "A Special Reunion" after all.

2056349
Because there aren't enough Twilight and Trixie fanfics...:trixieshiftright:

X3 so much potential here...keep goin pliiiiiiiz?

not bad
not bad at all
only a bit scared for babs and applebloom

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Sorry... I couldn't help it :eeyup:
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I can't post it directly

Applejack looked up at the sky. One of clouds straight above her looked suspiciously like a penis.:applejackconfused:

:rainbowlaugh:

Has Applejack met a certain psychologist named Sigmund Freud?

I'm not quite sure where this story is going, but I'm enjoying the ride there, nonetheless.:raritystarry:

oooh does this mean a family 3some? >:P

"Who was on top?"
Had me actually, factually laughing. :rainbowlaugh:
You're doing a great job with this story. :pinkiehappy: It wouldn't hurt to make the chapters a wee bit longer though.
(Hintity hint hint)

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