More please, this is getting good

I have no words....

(Joke) Alt. Title: (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: Big Mac And Braeburn Get Ready To Rumble

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i'm curious: do you read these stories before posting, or do you just make up alternate titles and leave
just curious

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Door #2: I just make 'em up and leave. This is actually the third time I've used (Funky) Apple Sex Farm: The first time was on Something Extra and the second was on Sweet Apple Aches.

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Because it sucks or because you liked it?

this....this is something....yeah something

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Well, I'm not a clopper...

BUT! That was funny as hell! So because I liked it.

Not going to lie.
I laughed myself stupid.
I don't know why...
>Like

More please! AJs increasingly trauatized mind is fun!

Lawl, this definitely needs a second chapter!

more of this i wana see where this goes! XD

PLease write more. THis is hilarious.

LMFAO FROM START TO FINISH please continue

Huh... haven't read this nor do I plan to but with the reviews...
Curiosity killed the cat.
Uh before I read this can someone tell me if it gets... discriptive... between the two?
It WILL be make or break for me. I am willing to give this a shot if its... subtle.
I don't have anything against homosexuality, but its not my cup of tea.
I await anyones response with mixed emotions.

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Compared to what I usually write (on other sites), it's not very descriptive at all. I tried to keep it somewhat subtle. It's told from Applejack's point of view, and everything is basically implied from what she hears from outside the barn. And there are a few brief images that pop into her head that I wouldn't really call 'descriptive', but they're not really subtle either.

I hope that helps.

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Herm.
I... suposse I could... give it a go.
Hell, I enjoy this enough, you will have another fan.
I enjoy helping out authors that write enjoyable stories with comments and feedback.
*Deep breath* Here we go...
Edit to follow.

That was...
different.
But, it dose seem funny. Damnit, I'm going to have to keep reading.

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I'm glad you at least enjoyed it a little. And thanks for the comments.

I have to warn you though, the next chapter I'm writing right now gets a little more descriptive.

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So be it. I guess I resolved to be more open-minded.
Damn you New Years. Oh well, I look forward to updates.

*Wispers to self*
My girlfriend would never let me hear the end of this if she found out...

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Hooray for open-mindedness!

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Hot.

Well this has potential.

I like how at this point they still could be doing something perfectly innocuous

not bad
not bad at all
only a bit scared for babs and applebloom

2068225 im scared they wont join in! no im joking. Its Sunday. foal con is for tuesdays.

This is sexy. Hehe~!