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Holy shit.
(ba-dum tish)
Wait is this scat...?
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No? What makes you think that?
5992960 this:
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I think he was referencing my name.
5993178 Ah. Well in that case, I retract my earlier misunderstanding.
Alright Holy, you have my interest piqued.
I politely demand more.
Can't help but imagine Harvey as Darnell from Christine... Damn it, now I want to rewatch that.
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That's pretty much what I was going for, actually.
Now I'm just imagining Sunset playing with a dismembered hand. It's glorious.
This was hilarious and totally awesome, I wish I could give it more than 1 like
This pleases me.
Hey, how is it not brought up that all three went to CHS?
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Story isn't over yet.
Was he really going to quote a copy pasta in a fight?
Im reading this story just cause I loved the description
I very mutch approve. Keep this going it's really funny!
Nice story.
Hot.
I can understand the general unwant of being shot at. It's scary as shit.
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Derp.
Ahh...reminds me of my college days...
Oh hey, Nylon Tights!
(Adds to read later)
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....Weeelll...
...that was... an experience..
This is great! I'll give you a kiss! No homo.
This has surprised me with it's depth of character and detail.
Carry on good sir.
Yes, the feeling of being shot at is never nice. Got caught in the middle of a gang fight once. Scary as fuck. Both sides thought I was with the other so I got shot at twice. it was scary but funny because no one was shot after the police showed up. Their aim sucked too much
just a few thousand dollars in property damage though
God, I hate that. If you could care less, it implies that you do care at least a little bit.
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6000656 iv been shot its much worse i will take shot at insted
"You guys, I'm being serious, this smoking thingy really isn't healthy for you. I think you should stop."
"Make me", Aria replied and puffed a ring of smoke into Sonata's face, who fell into a coughing fit much to the amusement of Adagio who was standing nearby with her own lit cigarette.
Anyone else read everything vinyl says in nowackings voice?
As always, I enjoy reading this. I can't wait for the next one.
This chapter was sweet.
Watch Vinyl somehow be naked between them when they wake up.
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You made me laugh. That would be so freaking golden. ^_^
I SHIP YOU TWO!!!
I start to smell jealousy between Vinyl and Sunset. I look forward to where this is headed.
Gah, I can't decide which is better. Vinyl or Sunset? Hmm...
I know, just go the creative route and have the protagonist end up with both.
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Sadly, I'm not going to go with the harem route.
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Understandable, Xenophilia was the first Fimfiction story I read (DON'T JUDGE ME!) and it has forever influenced me to want more polyamory.
I like the plot, the characters, the despriptions and the motive of Sunset's hidden love.
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I'm not even mad.
I love the ending of this chapter I want the main character to be with Sunset.
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Wait, your gonna actually make him choose between one of them? Man, ether way it goes, I have a feeling one of them is gonna be hurt, badly.
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Awnnn, I really would have liked the Harem route on this story
6023470 Given the history between the protagonist and Sunset, I think that Sunset would be the better relationship choice, plus it allows both Sunset and the Protagonist to be the friends that Vinyl needs to show proper compassion and companionship to really care about her, and just not as the next lay or joint buddy. It also may give Vinyl an opportunity to see what a healthy relationship looks like so that she can find a significant other that would care for her like Sunset for the Protagonist and vice versa. (The happy end route, if you will.) But that's my opinion on what I (as a reader) would like to see the story progress towards.
The scene with Sunset at the ending was very sweet and I like how Sunset and Vinyl are jealous of each other and compete for the protagonist's attention.
Vinyl must have dragged him up to the room and forced herself on him that night. I really dont see how he was able to get with her any other way being that dense. Both girls are practically screaming "LOVE ME!"
I wonder if when the tension or jealousy between Vinyl and Sunset gets high enough they are gonna get into a fight. a real fight
I'm absolutely loving the story!