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THE NAME OF THE STORY ALONE INTRIGUES ME.
I know I did. I like your sweet and sexy stories.
Holy's Sunset stories always make for great reading.
Lots of heart, most enjoyable backstory.
Think you got more in you? Say Little Stars
Continuation?
I anticipate this blowing up soon enough. And you know what? You deserve it. Excellent job.
A nice, if rough, return to the writing world, I'd say.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Will there be a sequel to this? I love to see how this will evolve.
Made me cry, you unholy monster. I love you.
Finally! A sequel to my favorite ever story from you holy! I have to say, it is just a good as the first. Loved every second of it man, great work!
This was really nice. I'm glad I took the time to read it, it was well spent in my eyes.
Bravo, my friend! Great story!
So I decided to read this while listening to a mixture of Meatloaf, Guns and Roses, Bryan Adams, and Bon Jovi....and god was that a good choice. I love these stories, and would LOVE to see these continue. Despite this being a 2nd person story, this guy makes me feel like he has a life, like, he's lived, not that he "has a life" if you know what I mean.
Seeing these two get back together after all these years, if your writing....makes my heart swell up with happiness. PLEASE Continue this. I wanna see these two finally get together, get married, have a long and loving relationship.
I don't even know this dude's name...and yet I want him to marry Sunset.
My life is weird.
But this story is great.
You sure your rusty? This was great. Makes me wonder about our main man and Twi's collage days though.
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That was amazing. Love it.
Glorious! Welcome back, Holy! Glad to see you haven't lost your touch. Would love to see more of Sunset and if possibly, maybe; you could do a sequel-prequel with Twilight? All the best.
I feel like the clunkiness just added to the feel of the story, that being two people who used to love eachother being reminded of how much they still do, even if they don't quite remember at first. All in all a very nice return to writing. I'll be sure to favorite this one.
Didn't know I needed sunset shimmer until now. 10/10.
This is the sequel we all needed
Name change cause I hate titles and this was more in-theme with both the story and its prequel. Bonus points if you know the song.
Absolutely beautiful. Nicely capturing nostalgia of bygone days, everyone's been there when things have been low.
I wouldn't have thought you'd have been away for years. There are a couple of misplaced words but nothing really major.
"She wastes no time in putting her hand around the base and letting your length into your her? mouth"
That's the biggest one, couldn't find any else while quickly skimming.
It was also really hot, the preceding development adding to it wonderfully as always
even with the slight errors here and there i still give this
This is just way to good and a worthy sequal for the first story, loved it.
Why the title change?
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https://m.Stay a Little Longer by Brothers Osborne
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Well that didn't take long.
Is the title a reference to Stay a little longer by Brothers Osborne? Also this was really good. it's good that your back. :) Aw someone beat me to it lol
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Lol
I like seeing if there is a musical reference in titles of fics and seeing if I can match a song to it.
The reactions can be amusing
8447144 Darn you for beating me too the reference lol XD
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Lol
Btw AC3 was the first AC I played so cool avatar
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I quite liked AC3 I knew it was disliked by a lot of people but I'm half native american and I love the Revolutionary War. So that game was a win win lol.
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What was the original title?
Loved it, btw! ^^
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The current chapter title.
Well then.... 10 out of 10! I LOVED IT!!! (hands you a six pack) Cheers!!
Wow. Envy
Hmmmm. A sequel to Sunshine and Whiskey.
I really loved the reading of it by I think it was Moanniverse. If I recall correctly. This may very well be worth a read.
So I just finished reading it and as usual just great work. I really do seem to like your more adult-life oriented stories as I am sure a good number of us readers can relate with the tedium and other such wonders of adult life.
It also adds a level of bittersweetness to these stories that is very relateable. It is nice to read up on your stories as ever. Keep it up,man.
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You said it better than I ever could.
Most of us have already grown up, looking back on things leaves you feeling bittersweet. Stories like this are easier to relate to, rather than the usual high school setting.
Also I just love that these stories are influenced by country songs. So far we've got What was I thinkin, sunshine and whisky, and stay a little longer. I'm hoping we see a few more of these. Maybe a Kip Moore one or one of them bittersweet ones like you're gonna miss this. Heck, that Toby Keith as good as I once was would make a pretty funny story.
Something about seeing a song written out as a story just blows me away, it makes it seem like the story is what gave inspiration for the song. I hope you keep writing, Holy!
It’s like finding one final cookie in that cookie jar. You think it was over, but there’s one more thing for me to fall into.
A sequel to Sunset and Whisky that was written about the original author and involves reconnecting with Sunset emotionally and physically?
WOAH!!!
Seriously, bro. This is f*ckin’ awesome, unexpected, and awesome. We need more fics like this!
That was... beautiful.
Man, I'm glad I understand what love feels like myself.
It's this kind of fluffiness that sustains my dark frame.
And there was boning, that was understandable.
Sequel sequel sequel! I need moar damn it. It's too good! Please write more!
I got more misty-eyed and aroused as I read. Mission Accomplished. God, I want more and for them to be happy together forever.
Also the story really makes me think of the song Strawberry Wine.
It’s nice to see the couple back together.