• Member Since 6th Sep, 2014
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Remedyfortheheart


My name is Remedy. Call me Remi. I've recently come into the fandom and have always had a secret passion and natural knack for writing and reading. So now with that said I'm setting it to the test.

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Had most of the grammar, punctuation, etc been fixed up a bit and remove the ending that was present in the previous story (as a separate story not chapter), this could've been a somewhat decent clopfic. I would also fix up the title a bit since this is more of a role-play of Trixie and Twilight Sparkle acting like students with Celestia acting like a teacher. Other than that, this story also has potential. :twilightsmile:

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*headdesk*

I done fucked it up haven't I?

5773304 One this is incomplete as labeled. Two was meant to be a series. Three this is my reaction to give my readers of "Molly was a Good Girl" what they were going for. I was assured majority of those dislikes were people just looking for straight up clop.

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