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VashTheStampede


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Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer have been together for about a month now, and share a morning and an evening together at home.

A/N: Destresser fluff, experimenting with a no-dialogue fic, written in like two hours. WOOOOO. Human tag because EqG world.

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With a somewhat stable, always-open bridge to the world of Canterlot High established in her basement, Twilight Sparkle had found herself spending increasingly more time in the human’s world.

humans'*

She’d been in the human world for four days now, she was due back in Equestria to report to the Princess on the progress the search for the Sirens, as well as that of Sunset Shimmer’s… remedial friendship lessons, as Celestia had referred to them.

progress of the*

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Now I'm curious as to what made Sunset so upset and it's killing me! My curiosity is easily piqued, my interest hard to hold, but you did both. Nice story and please tell me their's a sequel in the works that tells us why Sunset was crying.

I think it's anon-no-miss right?

That was such a cute story.

So sweet. :pinkiesmile: Short and sweet really does the trick sometimes. I'm impressed by how well it flowed with no dialogue; this is something many authors could stand to do better and I, myself, can't seem to do at all. :twilightsheepish: I very much enjoy fics like this and my only wish is that there were more of them. Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile: Hope to see more Sunlight from ya.

This was a very cute read, but if i may make a suggestion? Break up the paragraphs a bit more. It'll make it a little easier to get through.

so god damn adorable

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