An AU enthusiest. Always interested in the what-ifs and seeing how folks expand on them.
Twilight receives a letter from the Princess that crushed her world. Rainbow Dash knows a way to help her, but to do it she must reveal a big secret. When Twilight finds out what will her reaction be?
This is another 'secret personality' thing here.
WARNING: If you don't like reading the first fanfics that people create DON'T READ THIS!!! If you don't give a flying feather then unleash thy inner critic.
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I am sorry I must violently disagree with you. Your writing does not suck. As a first effort I think this is very well done.
And I must say that I can easily see Rainbow having a talent like that and keeping it quiet.
It will be interesting to watch and see what happens when you hit your stride.
5735013 Heh, heh. Thank you.
I want to make a less tragic version where Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Pinkie all find out about Rainbow's passion for the violin by going to a concert. Then they all find out and nopony dies. 
What do you think?
This is very well done. Are you looking to become a sad writer? You have a good start if you are.
5736328 Thank you!
Yeah I think I will be a writer who makes sad fanfiction. I am not good when there is no tragedy or sadness to base the plot off. I noticed this when I attempted to write the sequal. It's not out yet but there was no tragedy in it so I had a harder time focusing on the main plot. It's kind of annoying but I think I am better at tragedy and sadness because I have more of that in my life that your average person. I can describe the sorrow that the characters are going through because I have been there or I have had a similar experience. So I might just be the random guy who makes sad fanfiction. On the topic of sad fanfiction do you have a suggestion for one? I don't write scuidide however as that's just downright depressing.
A truly awe imspiring story. Deepest regret & Sympathies for Twilight. :.(
Okay, I'll admit, I did not see that coming. For a one shot, that caught me by surprise.
Rainbow Dash? Play an instrument? HA HA HA HA HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
5736592 You think you have a reason to be sad? I've been insulted and ridiculed since 3rd grade!
5839574 That sounds bad, but for me it has been since kindergarten.
5839556 Yup! ^_^ The violin because it's the polar opposite of her. Or the piano. XD
5839584 Did this turn into a who had the worse life fight? Cause if so, we should probably stop before we come across memories that we don't want to remember.
5839593 I agree. Truce?
Truce. I've gone through some terrible things that I probably shouldn't talk about over the computer, tablet, etc.
5839616 Or anything. On a different subject: PINKIES!!!
WTF mate?
5839792 My feeble attempt to change the subject. By your response it worked.
I understand.
5847186 Okay. ^_^
I feel that moustaches are in order. have a few... you deserve them. I had the feeling that rainbow was seen as comedy relief, to lessen twilights tragic mood. it certainly was different.
5956708 Heh, heh... Well I don't believe in comedy relief during tragic times. There's a time and a place for comedy. A death moment would NOT be a good place to me.
EDIT: Thank you for the moustaches. ^_^
Darn, not only good fanfiction, but that music what you choose, Lindsey Stirling, man, I don’t know her until I read this fic, honestly. Crystalize is one of her goods, but what got my breath was Roundtable Rival. She is creating ,darn great, music. Thanks, thanks lot... You show me her music and I appreciate it. Thanks again.
There is Roundtable Rival if you don’t find it.
6317920 WT ARE THIS?!?! SOMEONE WHO IS NOT KNOW LINDSEY STIRLING!?!?
Lindsey Stirling has quite the talent, hm? Imagining Rainbow having the same skills, it makes it look pretty cool!
I do like these things with Rainbow Dash having some ‘inner depth’. We need more stories like those.