Hearts Freezing

This story is a sequel to Concert

It's Hearths Warming and Rainbow is alone with thoughts of her mom. Twilight offers to help. What will become of this?

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Cryosite

Cryosite #1 · Mar 17th, 2015 · · ·

P.S. Takes place after the events of Concert but is not a direct sequal. It is recommend to read Melody first if this is the first fanfic you have read by me. There is detail you will find in here that can only be explained in Melody first.

Author does not understand the concept of sequels. If another of your works is required reading in order to understand this work, then either replicate the required material and, you know, actually fit it into this story, or make it an actual sequel.

femikol

femikol #2 · Mar 17th, 2015 · · ·

5750050 Oh okay. Thanks for the info! ^_^ But youre right I dont know the real concept of sequals. Sorry about that.

HuskieSnow104

HuskieSnow104 #3 · Mar 18th, 2015 · · ·

This was really good to read. poor Rainbow

Night--Mist

Night--Mist #4 · Mar 18th, 2015 · · ·

Alright, I didn't expect Rainbow's mother passing away part, and the dad, I suppose I can understand that he died when she was a filly. I just wonder what the show will incorporate, since we did catch a glimpse of what her dad looks like in "Games Ponies Play."

Anyways, it was a great chapter, I just hope that it doesn't take a dark turn for the Sparkle family household or Rainbow Dash if you decide to make another sequel down the road.

femikol

femikol #5 · Mar 18th, 2015 · · ·

5751718 Oh don't worry, it won't take a worse turn for the Sparkles or Rainbow! ^_^ Just some spoilers to all who dare look at this comment! And yeah I'm curious what the show plans to do with him. In any case in this series he is dead.

femikol