I know I shouldn't ask plot questions, but... are they in essence dead? I want to know if I should keep reading or if this is RooshV/Marjan Siklic/Asshole MRA stuff.
5888991 I don't know if I can give you an answer to that. Not because I don't want to, but because you and I think very differently. We've seen that in past discussions.
If you want me to, I can send you background information via PM and you can make your own call. That might be for the best since, again, we'll probably come to very different conclusions.
While she was gone, her best friends got coltfriends (or in the case of Sweetie Belle, a drakefriend), the dumb and dumber duo apparently shaped up enough that they got fillyfriends of their own (Snails and Silver Spoon, Apple Bloom and Snips). Diamond Tiara isn't around anymore, Twist and Truffle are DEFINITELY a very happy couple, and Rumble apparently has a crush on Scoots but can't either show it or say it, making him a bit of a tsundere.
I get that it's supposed to be a month roughly while Scoots was visiting family but that month seems more like summer vacation.
Oh please do, thank you! I usually like future CMC stories, but the distinct lack of lesbians makes me sad. And the lack of gays. And the lack of guillotines. Or any explanation for this Villain Sue that seems to be going on.
Seeing as how I'm just as much in the dark as Scootaloo I can't really comment too much. You need to have some sort of reveal, even if only a little one, to let us have some idea of what is going on.
I'm wondering if Snips and Snail's got their hands on an artifact. Their situation seems pretty wish fulfilling. The rest of the situation is collateral damage maybe?
Most puzzling aspect of this is why the 'mature' Scootaloo and the rest of them are in school? I realize it makes it easier to set up, but it seems like you're writing them as if they are still foals, but aging them up to get past the restrictions without actually changing their situation.
I've always seen them as being somewhere between fourteen and sixteen; much like their Equestria Girls counterparts, who appear to be in their high school freshman years. They'd still be mostly the same when they do come of age. Some changes would've have happened, of course!
But, this does tell me I've done a poor job of conveying that. They're not supposed to come across as children And it hasn't been mentioned yet, but this will also be their graduation year. Thank you for bringing these issues to my attention! I need to keep them in mind for future chapters.
Oh I am totally going to add your story to my favorites.
I know I shouldn't ask plot questions, but... are they in essence dead? I want to know if I should keep reading or if this is RooshV/Marjan Siklic/Asshole MRA stuff.
5888991
I don't know if I can give you an answer to that. Not because I don't want to, but because you and I think very differently. We've seen that in past discussions.
If you want me to, I can send you background information via PM and you can make your own call. That might be for the best since, again, we'll probably come to very different conclusions.
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Thank you!
When dose the tide turns? AAARG!!!
I'm with Scootaloo....What the buck happened??!!
While she was gone, her best friends got coltfriends (or in the case of Sweetie Belle, a drakefriend), the dumb and dumber duo apparently shaped up enough that they got fillyfriends of their own (Snails and Silver Spoon, Apple Bloom and Snips). Diamond Tiara isn't around anymore, Twist and Truffle are DEFINITELY a very happy couple, and Rumble apparently has a crush on Scoots but can't either show it or say it, making him a bit of a tsundere.
I get that it's supposed to be a month roughly while Scoots was visiting family but that month seems more like summer vacation.
this is looking to be pretty cool
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Thank you!
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Things changed pretty quickly, eh? I hope it'll make some sense as the story goes along
I am loving this story right now. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh please do, thank you! I usually like future CMC stories, but the distinct lack of lesbians makes me sad. And the lack of gays. And the lack of guillotines. Or any explanation for this Villain Sue that seems to be going on.
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Seeing as how I'm just as much in the dark as Scootaloo I can't really comment too much. You need to have some sort of reveal, even if only a little one, to let us have some idea of what is going on.
I'm wondering if Snips and Snail's got their hands on an artifact. Their situation seems pretty wish fulfilling. The rest of the situation is collateral damage maybe?
Most puzzling aspect of this is why the 'mature' Scootaloo and the rest of them are in school? I realize it makes it easier to set up, but it seems like you're writing them as if they are still foals, but aging them up to get past the restrictions without actually changing their situation.
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It's a little more complicated than that.
I've always seen them as being somewhere between fourteen and sixteen; much like their Equestria Girls counterparts, who appear to be in their high school freshman years. They'd still be mostly the same when they do come of age. Some changes would've have happened, of course!
But, this does tell me I've done a poor job of conveying that. They're not supposed to come across as children
And it hasn't been mentioned yet, but this will also be their graduation year. Thank you for bringing these issues to my attention! I need to keep them in mind for future chapters.
As for the other two parts... We'll see
Was this written after Bloom and Gloom?
This is interesting. Good job.
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Thank you! I hope later chapters will be to your liking as well.
Oh snap damn that was good