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THEJamiboi
I write in my spare time, as a hobby and I would appriciate some feedback on any stories I write here on fimfiction.
THEJamiboi
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Hahahaha..... What???
5681981 What?
5682000 I know right.
5682029 ...You've confused me! XD Congrats, I know only one other person who has ever managed that in my lifetime.
5682117 Anyways, i was referring to how the story made absolutely no sense, until i realised it is based off of some comic. Even still, it's pretty weird.
5682132 Indeed it is random, but then read the comic, it kinda suits it then! XD
5682143 Can you write a normal Chrysalis x Celestia ship fic?
5682155 I MIGHT, it depends if I feel like it, but it's not likely I'm afraid, sorry.
I must say, this was quite pleasant. Even though I wasn't able to rub one out... (the sex scene was way too short) I was able to appreciate the story in it's entirety, despite not having read the comic beforehoof. The story was a bit rushed but after the conception, it slowed down to a follow-able pace.i enjoyed this story and hope for another chapter. I bid you adieu. *bows*
I'm pretty sure you meant Throne and instead of
I'm pretty sure you meant "hey"
5683524 Thanks glad you enjoyed! :)
5684054 Fix the throne thing (My native, and only known, language is English, can you tell? XD)
As for the hay/hey, I think it works either way but I changed it anyway, thanks for feedback! :)
This was funny little story and thanks for the link to the comic.
I faved it.
5689196 Thanks, glad you liked both (though I only made the story, obviously)
I have been sitting here for a little while. I can't make heads or tails of this. I can't give this story a chance when the very first sentence in the description is gibberish.
5762483 I changed it for you, hope it makes more sense, sorry for the inconvenience. :)
waaaaaaaaaaaa so beatiful i very love it
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5774172 Glad you like it so much.
Also, that picture! XD
That ending!
One of the best "short" story's I've read in a while! Keep up the great work.
p.s. those 8 down votes are *******
6071862 I think a few of them, two or three, are just people who run around thumbing down stories with the sex tag. XD
I'm surprised Celestia had trouble with the pregnancy. After all ponies can carry their own weight with ease so an unborn foal shouldn't wear them down at all.
That meta was really cute.
6457970 Thank you. :)
And the reason, at least what I used, is that Meta isn't a normal foal, it is a hybrid and it's likely Celestia's body wasn't prepared much less suited for the job.
6458154
looking at them I would think that changelings are lighter than ponies.
6458392 It's not about physically weight sometimes, but the effect it has on the pony, Celestia might not be like she is due to the weight, but due to fatigue and the mess her body is being made into. But she'll have got better once it was over... It's just a new thing the body isn't accustomed to. :)
So much adorable... Hnnnnnng! *clutches chest*
7349125 Thank you :)
Okay that’s it you forgot to put periods at the end of each paragraph.