My Secret Garden

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When Sonata Dusk, alone and homeless, comes to my house, I show her around my magical secret garden. (A one shot)

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_____________ #1 · Feb 28th, 2015 · 3 · ·

If you're planning on writing romance, I think one strong suit you displayed was balancing humor with heart. With an author x Sonata Dusk story, it's really best not to take yourself too seriously. I'd like to see what you could do with a longer story since this is a little short, especially considering "you" and Sonata confess your love for each other by the end of the day.

Blondlionezel

Blondlionezel #2 · Feb 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5679618 Thank you for the feedback! Romance isn't usually my strong suit.

Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #3 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

Very cute, I'll admit. But the romance does seem really rushed. They've only known each other for a day and already they love each other. You need to give it time before they officially get together.

Blondlionezel

Blondlionezel #4 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

5680331 Thank you for your feedback!

Laknock

Laknock #5 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

“Why are you letting that fish eat the algae?” Sonata Dusk asked me confused.
“They help me keep the algae under control” I informed her, “His name is Percy”

Percy Jackson's ultimate fate.

Blondlionezel

Blondlionezel #6 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

5681140 I don't get it...

Laknock

Laknock #7 · Feb 28th, 2015 · · ·

5681144
The fish is named Percy, and Percy Jackson is the son of Poseidon. The entire series, he is threatened to be turned into an aquatic animal of some sort.

Blondlionezel