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Tunalock


It's called a hustle, sweetheart.

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Sonata Dusk has finally acclimated to life after being freed from the Siren Pendant. It seems like she has everything: a nice group of friends, a steady job, a simpler wardrobe, and even gotten away from Adagio Dazzle and Aria Blaze. However, there's one thing that's still missing from her life – someone to call her own.
Little does she know how soon her wish will come true.


Non-Mature featured on 1/26/15!


Thanks to these people for helping me out:
IrresponsibleCupid for the cover pic edit!
Don't Look At My Name Bro for story editing!
My friend Pea on Skype and Hivemind for looking over the story and making sure it's cool to pass on to the editor!
ThatOneWriter and Imagine for being idea bouncers!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 47 )

You ship Thunderbass and Sunset! :raritystarry: :raritystarry: I love you forever! :pinkiehappy:

5550347 Rockers at heart.
And hearts... at heart... or something like that.

Though I've never actually seen the Equestria Girls movies, this story strikes me as another well-written humanized fic. I'm eagerly interested to see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

Interesting...

For now, this goes on my "not-quiet-a-favorite-but-still-pretty-good" bookshelf. Keep up the good work!

5550398 Thanks!
5550400 I'll try. Maybe this will be my first fic to get consistent updates.
That'd be awesome.

Good Sir or Madam, you have my attention, :trixieshiftright:
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5550575 Oh, uh, you can have it back.
I didn't know I had it. Must've dropped into my bag somehow.

5550820
Sonata probably mixed up our orders then, because I'm pretty sure mine didn't come with this much awesome, :facehoof:

5550874 Holy shit, I've forgotten how fun it's been talking to readers.
That legit put a huge smile on my face.

That's something I've needed in recent times. Thanks.

Be sure to put quotes when they're talking to themselves. Otherwise, great start :twilightsmile: I like this version of Sonata

5550921 I'll be sure to put those in, man. Thanks!

Those shipping it had me like 'what' but over all great story

I like it. You've got a good beginning here. I eagerly await the next chapter!

5550398 You NEED to see them. Yeah, the first is kinda crap, but honestly, it's worth sitting through to get to the good stuff (by which, I mean the sequel Rainbow Rocks). :pinkiehappy:

well anything with sonata instantly grabs my attention.

Hmm, I see some definite good times ahead with the reading o' this.
Also, I know it's The Killers but I can't help but have that stupid "This is the story of a girl who cried and drowned the whole world" stuck in my head after looking at the title.

Named "Heart of a Girl" but not tagged dark?

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Honestly, that is the perfect name for a dark comedy revolving around everyone's favourite taco-waifu.

5551935 It's actually a song by The Killers.
Go listen to it, it's incredible.
5551885 Don't worry, there may or may not be more stuff ahead relating to best band.
I was originally going to name the chapter Read My Mind because of the scene with Mr. Neigh, but that wasn't exactly the focus of the chapter, so I changed it to what it is.

5552073 And good thing ya did, I dunno 'bout the rest o' the little audience you've accumulated thus far but I greatly appreciate music titles implemented into chapters or full-on story titles.
I swear, if you don't use "Smile like you mean it" or "When you were young", I will Internet Strangle you

5552174 Dunno if I Ian use those, but I've got some things from Day & Age that I'm liking…

I'll keep my eye on this, mostly because you aren't writing dumbass Sonata and I want to see where this goes. :twilightsmile:

5552073
Not gonna lie, I popped in here solely because I love that song (and every song from that album) a lot and hoped it was the one I was thinking of. :twilightsheepish:

5552513 You're in luck, then.

5552174 Actually, I have one reference in the story.
Go take a look at the opening lyrics to This Is Your Life.

Hmm, I like this Sonata and the beginning in general. Sure, I'll keep track and see where this goes.

That was good. I like it so far. The only thing that was off was all of the parings for Sunset and the mane 5, Only 1 of them is actually believable

5557530 I'll be trying to expand on that in further chapters. Have Sonata spend some time with the couples.
Possibly.
No guarantees.

Update soon plz!

5563150 Are you sure you want this? I'm gonna try to always be working on it. I don't want this to end up like literally every other fic I've written.

5563585 I'm absolutely sure! I love these little slice of life stories!

“What? Oh!” the girl shouted. “I-I’m so sorry, sir, I was just… well, I was… uh...” The man grumbled again and returned the game to its place on the shelf before he left. “Wait, I’m sorry!” Sonata yelled, hand reached out as if to grab him back. “Come back, I can still serve you!” However, it was too late. The man was long gone.

What?! That's like saying your late to a movie by one minuet and saying, "Ah well, too late now. Might aswell go home!"

He was right there! Why did he just give up?!

5593482 Well, he was waiting in line for a while.
Sonata can get sidetracked quite easily.

5593555 I understand that but I mean come on! He was right there! I can understand him never wanting to come back but why just leave? He actually wasted more energy by putting the game back and leaving than standing there and buying the thing!

...Sorry, I come from a family that hates waste and illogical things in general so I've become sorta of a pedant.

5593599 He's also an asshole?

5594632 Not also am I gonna say 'yes' I'm going the extra mile and saying he's a moron.

5594655 As a busboy, I've seen lots of people walk out.
One couple ordered waters and then just up and left. The waitress was so surprised.

5594883 They probably at least had a reason too. I've done something like that before when I walked into a place and just left. They were confused but I had forgotten that I was going to a party.

I enjoy this story,and I completely agree with how you characterized Sonata. Keep it coming! :twilightsmile:

Tomorrow's going to be a different day, and it’s not just because it’s Taco Tuesday. Something about tomorrow just… strikes a chord with me.

Well folks she said it. Hide the red shirts and dust off your hard hats because I sense that house is gonna be torn down with all her stuff inside it.

5699821 It's almost as if it's someone's last day on the force.

5700410 another chapter please? :applecry:

5738184 I'm trying, I really am. I just need to figure out how to go forward without making everything get dumb and need to get in contact with my idea bouncer so I can be sure I'm not making things dumb.

5738791 It's fine, I'm a believer in quality over quantity. Just making sure the story isn't dead :twilightsmile:

The table fell silent before Sonata spoke up again.

You said before they were by the statue, not in the cafeteria.

5776808 OH SHIT I DIDN'T SEE THAT, thanks for the catch. That was from the first draft.
I have no idea what you're talking about.

awww is this dead........ 46 weeks since you last logged in. Im currently going through my read later list and every single story is dead.

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