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SwiperTheFox
This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.
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first come at me bros!!
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that letter was so DAAAAAWWW
this story was also depressing a little
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>2012
>Going "First".
>I SERIOUSLY HOPE YOU GUYS DON'T DO THIS
(goddamn it... video link derped)
second! or whatever.....not that it means anything.
it's a pity there won't be a sequel to this story, it practically leaves itself open to one.
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There could be... maybe...
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*throws shuriken*
NOW I AM FIRST AHAHAH
Well I have to say the story was very depressingly short, but I liked it for the sheerly obvious reasons. Beggars cannot be choosers but they can have opinions
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dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png I dont see a problem i just do that and edit that comment when I'm done reading oh well dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
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that would be great and all, but...complete means complete. I sure would read the hell out of a sequel, but like I said before..... Unless you were stringing us along, hooking us into waiting for another chapter, then I might believe you...
oh screw it.....YOU BETTER DAMN WELL MAKE A SEQUEL AND MAKE NAO!!!
561733 RIGHT ON BROTHER!
PS sorry for the royal canterlot voice dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Well, dang! A human OC that's female?! About time someone did it..
EDIT: Too bad she's a total bitch.
eleventh!
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Great that you liked it!
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I'll think about a sequel... I'll just see how it goes...
The ending was kinda sad, but great story.
I liked this, different than usual human in equestria.
But I must say I don't personally know any human that thinks like that, I would never go out with a man or woman who viewed sex as such a-- loveless nonchalant act.
Nor know any that would- personally.
But hey people like her exist, and it's interesting to see her in Equestria! Good job!
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No worries. although I did get a Hulk Hogan-ish just now from reading that. (how are you using those extra smilies?)
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They call those kinds of women "sluts", which is a derivative of an old Sioux Indian word (that I can't recall at the moment) for "money-less whore" meaning that "Midnight" has just enough self-esteem to not accept money for an act as intimate as sex, but who is too emotionally fragile to acknowledge the deeper relationship that would normally result from such an act, unlike Twilight, who in this case is the more emotionally normal one.
I loved it seriously why aren't there more human female x pony clopfics I've only ever read one other than this and it's a damn shame they are so rare.
I hope to see more like this in the future possibly even a sequel? I hope I hope I hope
562523 Ha yes! That sounds about right.
It made for an interesting, althouh sad, story though.
562574 Did you read the pinkie x human girl one? I don't remember its name but it was REALLY..REALLY good. Very well written.
We do indeed need more like that.
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Eeyup that's the one it's called "Sugar Baby" by Fillycolt
It's the only story that I have seen by that author.
562910 Yees, that author really should do more- it was such an adoreable piece.
Anyway about this story, some people are calling out for a sequel here, but I don't think midnight will ever return, and I think Twilight might move on. Hopefully.
But! A prequel? How was the first time? Such a strange dynamic between those two, could be really interesting.
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A prequel would actually make more sense, you're right, and it might be intriguing to write.
The thing is= I really didn't enjoy the process of making this very much. f/f in general isn't my thing, and f/f involving humans is 'eeeeeeehhhh' to me. I'm actually surprised that this story worked so well.
At first I was:
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But then I was:
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She's exactly like Twilight! Only, she's not like her at all. Okay...
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Her body and character was/is very similar, but Midnight's soul is totally different. That's what I was going for.
this was nice
not just the clop
but the emotions underneath it
you get a star and a thumb
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You should just do it if you wanted to, of course. This story got its intent across in a good way.
I remember you mentioning the ff thing somewhere though, I am sort of like that when it comes to F/M. Sort of.
You write good F/M though. So I stick around for that.
And yeah, as the others have mentioned, this was pretty good as a story overall. Not all things have a happy ending.
I do still hope Twilight eventually moves on though. Hooopee.
562501 magic *snort snort* dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
MOAR please!
Here's what I think happened next: Midnight barely misses the portal back to Earth, the letter reappears, Midnight reads it, cries, goes back to Ponyville.
Honestly, this wasn't as sad as I thought it would be, from the way Midnight presented herself in this story. I do understand the feelings and longing Twi had for her.
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ill never understand how you consistantly make great clop fics
All I wanted was a clopfic before bed.
Why can't I can't hold all these feels.
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Sorry dude. In fairness, though, I do have the tag 'sad' as well as a picture of sad Twilight as the illustration... and other things there.
I hope that you do like the story and the sex scene for what they are.
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No need to apologize, man. It's a great piece, lots of powerful emotions here. Just not what I was expecting, haha.
I love that you used a female human character, it is a shame that there are so many human in Equestria stories yet almost every single one is about a man. Also, while flawed, the letter at the end was very sweet; it is certainly a heartwarming sentiment, and it is fitting for a land like Equestria to understand sex and love that way. I must say though, Midnight is grossly underdeveloped. Nearly every one of her character traits is told to us by Twilight, and the ones that are shown in the story are unpleasant. It is hard to tell why Twilight would be interested in her in the first place. Also, just one more quick nit pick. It is generally (in my experience) a bad idea to refer to any kind of sexual object as "a thing," (ref -> "feeling Twilight's magical thing") "phallus" may have been a better word to use. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this, and I commend you for trying something different, but I think you could still stand to work on a few elements.
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Great that you like it. As for the portrayal, I did try to make a more "realistic" human-in-Equestria story where the human was unsympathetic and had a very "modern" sort of view of things. I also really don't like f/f parings that much. So, this whole thing was more of an experiment than anything.
kinda sad but still good.
Dx
Interesting approach. I'd be curious to see Midnight's reaction to the letter; somehow I think she'd be slightly less callous with Twilight's feelings out in the open.
I'm heavily inclined to disagree...
Lets see... story was okay :P
Hm, of what I read so far though, feels a little "eh" in terms of arousal description, not bad by all means, but kinda monotone in just going with the wetness. Plus, Twi parting her legs "further", or at all, doesn't do much, bar moving her legs, sorta... might help give better space for the mammaries.
But hm... yeah, like said; feels like it could have added a lot more in descriptive terms. Like, doesn't even mention how she gets to Twi's clit. She just licks it somehow. No mention of winking, or her going in for it. So, yeah, sex felt a little bland and cliché, but it had some parts that were neat as well.
And eh... alost feels like it aims for more penis pleasuring than vulva at the horn part, but whatever. It wasn't glorified. Bit random with the breast part, but eh, guess Twi can have a reason.
... and hm... really questioning on the "implied phallus"... but it was at least double I guess... okay, really feels like trying to supplement a male into the story or something with some of the terms used... and the climaxes were a bit meek, same goes for genital descriptions... though, if you wanted a "imagine it yourself", that works.
Did however find the concept of "love" and "sex" between the species as an interesting concept however.
So yeah, had some really nice parts, some kinda eh. Could do with polish, but wasn't the "fake lesbian" terrible by any means :P
Just at most a little lackluster so to speak. But I got a bit of a standard so... sorry if being picky ^^' As said: did like it was actually a lesbo fic, unlike certain others...