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dat pic
Twilight Sparkle’s first person account of that very relationship from awkward start to awkward finish.
that finish is holding me back T_T
//edit: I don't like the way this is going, I hope her foresight was in hindsight shitsight.
"One doesn’t simply forget an appointment with Rainbow Dash."
ENDING, Y U SO CHOPPED OFF?
Oh god
I want to read this, but considering how all the TwiDash in Preggity actually made me feel jealous over a cartoon horse
I can't imagine what this would do.
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Not bad... not bad at all. It's late here, so I'll admit I skimmed. I did see some grammar and spelling errors... and there's the whole thing with the chapter ending in the middle of a sent--
But in any case, it's a good premise, and it has potential, I'll point out some more specific things tomorrow.
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As far as a sequel seems to go, so far this is excellent. You have an excellent talent for writing these type of fics, and I hope to see more soon.
I really, really like this! Please keep up the excellent work!
Freakin' beautiful work. Seems like your stories are the only ones that truly get me to read far past the time I normally sleep. They're very absorbing.
I love the Wheel of Time-esque approach to magic. Not saying you're copying or anything, I'm just a fan of that view.
Please update, I'm dyin' with all this waiting.
This hasn't been abandoned, has it? Please? With a start like this, and the way their relationship runs in Preggity...
Need moar!
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wow stufficul
its a clopfic but ill read it still there all just another version of some differnt clopfic
>Unicorn Diaries updated
>Anything but a wonderful, wonderful thing
AN UPDATE! CELESTIA AND LUNA BE PRAISED!
I've been following this for ages, repeatedly thinking it had been given up. I turns out I've been pleasantly surprised :D
So long in coming but still great.
An update and a good one at that! I will keep my hooves crossed that more chapters are forthcoming soon?
Merely seeing that this had updated made my day. Actually reading it? So much better.
Two updates in a row? You're spoiling us. I already remembered why I keep telling everyone that this is my favorite fic of them all.
Wow that was a good read, i can't wait to read the next chapter now.
"She can have the sun if she wants." This line, awesome.
I'd love a partner story to this from Dash's perspective. I mean, loyalty's a hell of a weight to tied to in her situation.
MOAR MAN!!! this was an excellent read and i love it!! keep it coming!!!
Awesome chapter!
a fantastic story, with characters so well developed and plus, very well written sex scenes
this story deserves much more attention than it have
“Don’t need the books for this one though. I’ve got the cure right here...”
so much win when you realize that the Double quotes are for a spoken phrase and not a thought,the love is building up bit by bit
I went through super happy to deeply depressed...
thank you sir
Well...... I'm very, very sad right now....
The saddest part is that, due to her personality and aspect, Dash will just keep taking this kind of abuse.
I suppose more needs to change in Twilight's mind before she'll finally commit to poor Dash, might as well do something flashy and cataclysmic while pointing that out.
Shame there's no Celestia in this. (Yet?) That could be an interesting twist.
YAY up Date
God I hope there's a happy ending...
This is pretty intense. Twilight is a terrible mix of self destructive and selfish at this point. She's just using the diary as an excuse to vent all hers fears about giving up her hopes for Celestia, her growing contentment with Dash, and her guilt about Dash being so much more invested in the relationship than she realized.
I think Twilight is scared by Dash's self depreciating co-dependence and vulnerability because it's way too close to how Twilight really feels and seeing it from the outside is terrifying her.
God this makes me sad.... but I just can't stop reading it, just such a good story... just please let there be a happy ending
Wow just wow this was one hell of a chapter. It hard to describe just how awesome it was, I can’t wait for the next chapter. I have to say this is one the best I have read(also one of the best twi-dash stories) and I can’t wait to see what you have planned next.
Finally! Great job pulling them back together.
I liked that Dash's side of this got told. Kind of a shame we probably won't get a side story to this side story from Dash's perspective.
Every time I read a chapter of this story I try to up vote it only to find that I already have. I wish I could up vote it more than once.
aww that was sad
I love that Twi thinks Rainbow is talking about Rarity this story is too cool.
excellent
Even after everything. After the fights. After Twilight nearly killing her, Rainbow still sees her losing control, and without a second thought flies her above Ponyville. Even if it means dying, she will protect her town, and be with the mare she loves.
That's my Dashie.
Have I mentioned how unspeakably happy it makes me that you not only came back to this story, but are posting very regular updates? Very, very, very unspeakably happy. And angry. And sad. And lots of other feels that very few fanfics manage to get out of me. I think the only other fic that has ever caused more feels than this one was Fallout: Equestria.
Keep being awesome.
Wow, just wow.
I'll be honest, I was only reading this becuse of how much I liked Preggity and the fact that Rarity's husband is in it (love that guy), Twilights behavior irked me to no end and I was tempted to simply stop reading it.
But then in a stroke of genius, Rarity and Rainbow Dash actually calls Twilight out on her behavior.
This chapter was FANTASTIC and it made the earlier chapters make so much more sense.
Thanks for writing, I'm a very happy bunny right now.
I this has an unhappy ending, I. WILL. KILL. Y....O....U. kk?
I cried......I cried when I finished the last chapter so far. You have broken my solid steel resolve.....WHY AM I GETTING EMOTIONAL!?!?? ****
Worth the wait.
Gah! Must have happy ending!
All of my feels.
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Glad to be back, for as long as I can be! Thanks for sticking it out and coming back!
Wow another awesome chapter you have a way with words. Also first I always wanted to say that. I can’t wait for the next chapter; this is one of my favorite stories on this site keep up the good work.
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