Secrets beckon to all humans but only the foolish and ignorant search for what is not meant to be discovered. Such is the fate of men.
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I am the Burnt Ivory king and this is my new life in Equestria. I am now stuck in the land of Technicolor ponies and rainbows
Please before reading this learn about the lore of the souls series from dark souls 1 and 2 to get a better understanding of whats going on in the story.
If you like this story and want similar content take a look at my story Sir Alonne
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Fix The Bio and Chapter names, So They are Bearable for civilized readers.
-Mootykins
5674559 fixed em'
5674574
now in the next chapter if you so happen see flash sentry
FUCK EM UP
5678006 Don't worry If I ever have Flash sentry I will fuck him up.
5678073 I approve mortal. do not disappoint me.
5678627 I am a king and I am immortal
5678073 came to the wrong neighbourhood bitch
5768291 Lol the Ivory King is pissed
5768294 that he is.......that he is
good story keep it up
Since when did ponies say God?
WHEN DID PONIES SAY GOD!?
Anyways, you're messing up on some spelling errors, no biggee.
But, you also use * Which isn't really good for your stories. I'd suggest you should stop doing that.
Just a suggestion.
WHEN DID PONIES SAY GOD!?
6234689 ponies could in theory say God because they might worship a god or the god of the Jewish, Christian or the Islam faith sense I believe all three worship the same or a similar god in theory. But yeah sense they are human creation technically they might worship us as their gods or the god we worship
6234689 just because it's not in the show doesn't mean it can't be in written fics bro calm your tits
6235054 They do not worship Jewish, or Islam, or christian. Ponies are Ponies, in the show, they are directed as one belief, as the majority of ponies believe in the same religion. Besides, those are human religions, this is Equestria we're talking about.
6235517 Yes but there is a chance they could worship the same gods or maybe this is a saying twilight picked up in the human world. you need to keep your mind open to new ideas and such because I'm gonna tell you this a lot of the best stories on this site have ponies say that bro. so if your gonna be upset because of that then there are not gonna be a lot of stories you'll enjoy dude. And just because you don't worship god doesn't mean I don't because I do.
6237268 Never said that I dont worship god, I never said that so please dont bring that shite up. But I get where you got it from. I also get where your coming from but, as I see it, it would make sense.
And a lot of the stories that I enjoy, including and not including big stories, dont have this in it.
Besides, all big stories dont mean we should like them. Infact, I dislike a lot of the major fimfiction stories.
6237268 and how would they pickup human religion without other humans (Other than the main character)? It wouldnt make sense.
Oh, and a full review on your first chapter now.
You threaten Twilight Sparkle, who would immedietly stand their ground.
You put a blade to her neck, possibly passing other ponies who dont act at all?
Shining opens door, shoots you with magical spells, you have no reaction to the threat. Then all of a sudden he wants to talk?
Its a pretty weird story, especially since some of it doesnt make sense.
But hey, im just here to help improve your stories, and give you some feedback.
Take this advice or not, you decide.
6262870 I wrote this story a long time ago so I admit it's not that good. And to understand the sort more youyd need a good understanding of dark souls 2 lore
Update?
I got interesting into some of your stories. I plan to read the one with Sir Alonne, i havent read it yet because i only recently finished Dark Souls 2 and well Alonne killed me................alot.
I read The fall of the Burnt Ivory King first chapter and it seems really interesting. Still i wonder what would a story be if the 4 kings(Vendrick, Sunken, Ivory and Iron) all came back.
You had The Crystal Empire was build over Eleum Loyce but what abou the other kingdoms?
-The realm of the chagelings or/and diamond dogs was build over Shulva the sanctum city of the iron king
-The dragon lands were build over iron keep,hunter grounds, brume tower and harvest valley
-Canterlot rest over the ruins of Drangleic.