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Lady Maria


Secrets beckon to all humans but only the foolish and ignorant search for what is not meant to be discovered. Such is the fate of men.

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Seth the angel of saints jumps into battle and faces off with the mighty abyss lord.

These two souls will clash and only one will come out victorious who will it be?

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And so the mighty abyss lord was defeated. Oblivion has met his match and for his crimes he has payed dearly for them...

Okay, the reviews should start with positive stuff... So yeah, the grammar was better than I expected. But then, there are dry descriptions of fights, rushed fic (I had that feeling when I saw that a fic called "The War Between Gods" is only 1.4k words long. The wars between goods should definitely be more epic), and probably two biggest sins: picture embedded in the story (it works only in Survivor Shy) and youtube video embedded in the story (it never works).

5595769 Well its fixed now I got rid of the video and I have no editor so there is not much I can do about the punctuation or grammar

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Well its fixed now I got rid of the video and I have no editor so there is not much I can do about the punctuation or grammar

You can fix them.

Comment posted by Lady Maria deleted Feb 9th, 2015

5596925 yes but I need a freaking editor.

5600131 I'm open, if u still need one.

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