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Leo Archon 612278

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    Leo Archon's Stories (6)

    • Ponypuff Girls
      Lauren Faust's two biggest girls shows meet! Everpony wins!

      10,525 words · 7,063 views · 541 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Pony Fantasy IV
      Final Fantasy IV... with ponies! What else could you want?
      53,208 words · 2,209 views · 141 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Infernals
      Two ponies' dark pasts catch up to them. Drama ensues.
      18,153 words · 617 views · 51 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Turnabout Storm: The Case is Lost
      AU bad ending for the famous Phoenix Wright/MLP crossover; Not every bad ending is necessarily tragic.
      3,367 words · 529 views · 21 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Song of Change
      4,668 words · 290 views · 11 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Bridge to the Heart
      2,514 words · 305 views · 9 likes · 15 dislikes

    The latest scheme of a Townsvillain hurls the Powerpuff Girls to another dimension. In new bodies, and with different abilities each, the three must adjust to life in Ponyville. It helps that the locals are friendly. Maybe the Girls can have actual friends for once, rather than admirers...?

    This was actually my first foray into MLP fanfiction. I wrote the beginnings of this long before I conceived of Pony Fantasy IV. So, enjoy my attempt at crossing Lauren Faust's two popular girl shows!

    Image courtesy of GalooGameLady on DeviantART. Used with her permission.

    First Published
    7th May 2012
    Last Modified
    7th May 2012

    Comments ( 281 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :yay: awwww yeah!

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    IT WAS ONLY A MATTER OF TIME! :trixieshiftleft:

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...Powerpuff Girls as ponies.... WELP! Fluttershy is no longer the most adorable thanks to Bubbles.

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This looks fun and interesting!

    Calling it featured box

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    One thousand times yes. I'm definitely looking forward to Blossom matching wits with Twilight.

    As well as the inevitable "team vs. team" and "both teams vs. common enemy" fights that tend to come up in these types of crossovers. Not that that's a bad thing!

    If you continue to write everybody in character the way you already seem to be doing then this could be a great story indeed. You've got my star and thumb.

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You know whats weird, this is the first PPG - MLP crossover fic that i've seen. I would have expected seeing a lot of these.

    But nope, I mostly see Mass Effect crossovers.

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Wow...you'd think this would be the most used crossover...and yet this is basically the only one (that I've seen anyway)...very strange :rainbowderp:

    Still, its awsome! :rainbowwild:

    Now I must wait for the eventual meeting of Bubbles and Fluttershy...its only a matter of time. :pinkiehappy:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>557581 Likewise! You'd think I'd have tripped over a hundred of these so far, given the shared creative history, but this is the first PPG/FIM crossover I've seen. Plus it's pretty well-written, which is a bonus.

    Think I'll track this one. :yay:

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Blossum! She is the fearless leader!

    Bubbles, she is the joy and the laughter,

    Buttercup! She is the toughest fighter,

    Powerpuffs save the day!

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    McCrackinXFaust best irl shipping.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This party is going to be BIBLICAL :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #13 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I Can't believe i remember this show.

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    and i slowly click another tab on my internet browser

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558241

    indubitably:moustache:

    #16 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558241

    I did see what you did there dood....:ajbemused:

    #17 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558455

    Really? Because I didn't...:derpyderp1:

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558509

    Did you know that" This party is going to be BIBLICAL"  is almost the same quote from the movie Law Abiding Citizen were the villan/ victim says " This is going to be Biblical".

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558530

    Nnope:eeyup:

    I've never seen that movie. I just used the term "Biblical" as an expression for Huge or Epic

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>558540

    Mmmmh concidence?

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    i want to sing the theme song now...

    #23 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh dear lord. I want to see this.

    #24 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm under the assumption that the reason Pinkie Pie can outrace even Dash is because he consumes so much suger that her molecules have accelerated to the point were a second to her is an hour to everyone else.

    Like when FDry drank 300 cups of coffee in Futurama.

    #25 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Blossom and Buttercup must get Twilight and Bubbles mixed up all the time. What with them sounding so similar and all.

    #26 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Enjoying the story so far, you've got a thumbs up from me.

    #27 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Cannot wait to see the party. :pinkiehappy:

    This story = awesome.:twilightsmile:

    #28 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Keeping a good eye on this one. :twilightsmile:

    #29 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hmmmmm. I'm a little worried at how bubbles is easily keeping pace with Rainbow dash.

    I love this concept, but do be careful not to overpower the Powerpuffs... or make them god-mode characters that blow the Mane 6 out of the water at every turn. I get that they're super heroes, but if they solve every problem they face with minimal effort it won't make for a good stroy.

    #30 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560349 Oh, trust me, they'll have their share of problems.

    As for Bubbles keeping pace with Rainbow Dash... I remember an episode where the PPG broke the lightspeed barrier. Bubbles knows she's faster than Rainbow, but she's letting the older pegasus keep her pride.

    #31 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560362

    Ah thanks for clarifying, and the reassurance. I wonder how dash will react when she see's just how crazy fast Bubbles is. (Might wanna mention that they've got Chemical X at that point?) Oh and also... no cutie marks right? Wonder if the CMC will be getting three new members and the PPG/PPF (powerpuff filles) might get three fast new freinds. Hehe! Onto the next chapter!

    #32 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Bleargh! Threw up too many rainbows of awesomeness! This is not only adorable, but it's very well written, the dialogue is fabulous, and the cutie marks? Genius! This is just entirely too fitting, and henceforth, I shall assume you're secretly Lauren Faust mingling with the bronies. Faved, liked, moustached, and most violently watched!

    5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560386 Ahem. Read Chapter 2 carefully. I gave the PPG cutie marks.

    #34 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560417

    Ah, just read it! loving it so far, and I just finished the last chapter.

    Just a few gripes though... aren't the PPG's in like kindergarten/grade school? You've listed their age as 12 and I'm not sure about that.

    More Importantly though, while it's cool to have them show off thier powers to Mane six, it... kinda feels like you're obviously placing them as superior to the Mane 6. Even if it's not explicit, it feels like the story is shouting: Buttercup is a better applebucker than Applejack, Bubbles is a better flyer than rainbowdash and can speak with animals better than fluttershy, and Blossom is better prepared and better at magic than Twilight. (Seriously? After living with spike for years in a BIGGER library, raising him from an egg, She doesn't know a single anti-fire spell?)

    What I'm trying to say is, while the powerpuffs are awesome, I'm worried that you might downplay the abilities, and WORSE, the representation of the Mane 6 in comparison to the PPGs.

    I don't mean to seem rude, but I've seen that happen with far, far to many crossovers. I just don't want to see it happen here. It's a little too early to tell now though, and you're keeping the freindly spirit of MLP so far, and that's a plus!

    Hope you get something useul out of my comments, and I can't wait to read more.

    #35 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560550 This story takes place YEARS after the PPG cartoon. So, the Girls are older now.

    And worry not, I'm going to do my best to have both sides equally impressed with each other.

    #36 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>560561

    It's not just impressed I'm worried about, it's equal representation throughout your story. Still, to early to know for sure. Thanks for reading my comments.

    #37 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I totally saw this coming. But who says thats a bad thing?

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh my god the nostalgia.

    #39 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Excellent, can't wait for more!

    #40 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Normally, mah brother Big Macintosh would haul the wagon, but he went and hurt his ankle, so he ain't up to pullin' nothin' for a while."

    I swear, I think Big Macintosh is just trying to avoid work, he gets injured so often in these stories.......... wait, I might be on to something.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Didn't you forget super speed and damage resistance?

    #42 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561379 And how, pray tell, were they supposed to test either of those? They were in a small forest clearing, and as for damage resistance, the only feasible option would be to have Buttercup smack the other two around, or Blossom blast them with her heat ray. They're sisters, they're not going to hurt each other without a darn good reason.

    #43 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This was actually my first foray into MLP fanfiction. I wrote the beginnings of this long before ...  lol wut (in you description)

    #44 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561494 What? It's a legit word. It means this was the first time I wrote something pony-related.

    Seriously, did you not pay attention in English class? :trollestia: I kid, I kid.

    #45 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561522 Lol nop thats why I failed (mainly couse of ponies) ok then I guess that clears that up lol :coolphoto:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "As she did so, however, something felt off. Why couldn't she feel her hands?" "Trying to massage her head didn't help that much, especially since she no longer had fingers."

    But... but... they don't have hands~! OR fingers! :applecry:

    #47 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561665 Patience, young pony, and all shall be revealed. :trollestia:

    Seriously. I'm going to weave some of the backstory for the PPG into future chapters.

    #48 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    the most epic pic ever done about the PPG's turned into PONIES

    http://ppg.snafu-comics.com/?comic_id=231:rainbowkiss::yay:

    #49 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561396

    They could have done it like Leeroy Jenkins.:flutterrage: It would have tested both powers.

    #50 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Good job mate! Makes sence Bubbles would keep pace with Rainbow. She flies lightspeed every day!:rainbowdetermined2:

    #51 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561677 That's... pretty awesome, actually. Too bad it wasn't real. Then again, PPGD is significantly darker than the actual show itself.

    Still, I like my choices for the Girls' breeds better.

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561665

    I agree with you there. It would have been a funny and unique twist from normal for these three to be some of the only pony transformed folk to actually be perfectly comfortable with getting hooves and using them just like they used their nub hands.

    #53 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A commendable fic. I was kind of expecting it to go more along the lines of the ppg end up saving the day across Equestria but if they are going to be hanging round the mane 6 thats cool to. Its your fic so don't let us ruin it.  

    Also here is my prediction.

    At the party Bubbles hears something in the forest and uses here better vision to find a hydra headed for town. She tells the the others who discuss it since they arn't 100% but decide to go save the town, maybe Buttercup runs ahead and the others follow. Anyway they save the day, likely with Buttercup saving Applebloom from being crushed by using super strength.

    After saving town Twilight, who already became somewhat suspicious during the party, tells Celestia, and by extension Luna, who meet the ppg and decide they should reside in Ponyville with the mane 6 to get better acquainted with being a pony, or finding a way home.

    After reading your fic this is the storyline I pictured for about 90 minutes afterward. You wrote so well the story has continued in my head, thank you good sir.

    Also while the ppg seem overly strong they are still superheroes, their powers are just a bit different. you couldn't stay true to them and have them not be overpowered in some way, I mean come on they were established as the fastest and strongest heroes in the show.

    #54 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    He-he-hell no... I hate Powerpuff/Ponypuff C****. Ya mad?

    #55 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's better than most Fallout and Mass Effect crossovers.

    #56 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I know you meant for this to take years later after the initial show, but this causes a lot of the characterization to be very off. I was just waiting for Bubbles to freak out at seeing such adorable ponies and immediately abandon the girls to talk to any of them, but her affection for all things cute seems to be severely downplayed her.

    However, that's mainly what disappointing me about this story, you made them older for some inexplicable reason. It just ends up making them boring. The great part of the original show was that they were little girls, heck, it would of had a lot of potential if they made from with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, since so many fans have already compared themselves to them.

    Eh, I'm not saying it's bad, but it seems like a waste of a good premise.

    #58 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This is so epic that I give you rainbow kiss.

    :rainbowkiss:

    And an E-hug.

    It's 20% cooler than a normal hug.

    #59 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Overall, nice work. Your writing's a bit stilted in places (the cutie mark reveals, especially), but I'm definitely enjoying this.

    #60 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    #61 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    OH GAWD YESH

    #62 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>557495 You got it right!

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    They never had fingers. In fact, they had trouble with hands with fingers.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q49NYwy3k48

    Hands don't work hee hee.

    #64 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    wait, didn't Lauren Frast got involved in the production of the powerpuff girls?:applejackconfused::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpytongue2:

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I have to ask.

    What was Buttercup's unique power?

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Bubbles is best.

    #68 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I really want ponyfied Mrs Bellum now... And Mojo-Jojo in Equstria!

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Ahh my heart, this is too awsome!

    #70 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Interesting. However, some of the characterization is a bit weird. The girls are adopting to their situation way too quickly. I have only semi-vague memories of PPG, but I doubt that Buttercup would so easily fall into depression or let it show.

    #71 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It was nice but I have to much to read as it is. I love da PPG but I'll have this in my read later and I'll catch up on the updates when I'm done with the other stories. :twilightsmile:

    #73 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    *sees featured box*

    Aha! It took 1 day to get there eh?

    #74 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Buttercup you need to meet RD.

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>564171

    Curling her tongue.

    #76 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>564299

    You're right.

    BIg Mac is still the most adorable pony.

    #77 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy + Bubbles = Adoraexplosion of universe.

    #78 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I can't wait until the Powerpuffs find out that their friends are all superheroes as well.

    In a sense.

    #79 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Seriously? My two favorite shows have been crossed!? :pinkiegasp:

    YES! ALL OF MY YES! MOAR, PLEASE MOAR!

    Seriously, excellent writing, bro. I am thoroughly enjoying this! :twilightsmile: Keep up the awesome work!

    #80 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I don't even remember my birth parents.

    I've only seen a few episodes of PPG but are you saying the Proffesor never told them the truth that they were a science expirement/accident?

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The city of Townsville!

    I cannot stop hearing that guy's voice. I love his voice so freaking.

    Sugar, spice, and everything nice! These were the ingredients used to create the perfect little girls, but Professor Utonium accidentally added an extra ingredient to the concoction: Chemical X!

    Thus the Powerpuff Girls were born! Using their ultra super powers, Blossom, Bubbles, and Buttercup, have dedicated their lives to fighting crime, and the forces of evil!

    So following this.

    May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

    Shire Folk

    #82 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>559291

    The irony of that quote is not lost upon me. :twilightblush:

    #83 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This gon be good:rainbowkiss:

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Dat intro :rainbowlaugh:

    #85 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh my.

    #86 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>557581 Actually, this is the second good one I've found on this site. Here is the 1st one. It's on hiatus though.:fluttercry:

    #87 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    As I recall, Bubbles was not the type to insult anyone's knowledge of anything, so you should probably change it so she's not insulting Blossom's knowledge of unicorn behavior. That's the kind of thing Buttercup would say, not Bubbles.

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>561379

    And Bubble's ability to talk to animals. I can see who's going to be Fluttershy's best friend. :yay:

    #89 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>557494 nope still Fluttershy

    #90 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>564182

    So then Derpy's special talent is....Bubbles?

    Bubbles...fun and silly...Cute voice...stronger than she looks....yeah, that sounds about right. Her special talent is being everything that a PPG character can do. Save flying faster than light, although, if you play that Colgate platformed game, Derpy somehow traveled in time to deliver an application...:derpyderp2:

    #91 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>560349 In the Powerpuff Girls show, Bubbles was the fastest flier of the three. She even beat the Super Hero Email, who could go around the world in seven seconds, in a race to see who was the fastest. Keeping up with Rainbow Dash would be a cake walk for Bubbles.

    #92 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pretty good so far!

    #94 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Now this is awesome!! :twilightsmile:

    #95 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>564558 Blossom was lying to not give Rarity the wrong impression. Blossom doesn't want anypony to suspect that she and her sisters aren't natural.

    #96 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    SO AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

    Tracked, thumbs-upped.

    #97 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Read them one after the other, and they get better the further I go. So far, I'd have to say this is one of my new favorites. Let's see where this pony-ride leads! :pinkiehappy:

    #98 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Y'know, if they weren't the Powerpuff Girls, I'd accuse them of being mary sues.

    But...

    They are the Powerpuff Girls. So... that's okay then. :twilightsmile:

    #99 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: IT'S THE POWERPUFF GIRLS!!! IN PONY FORM!!! can't wait to read.

    #100 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>560561

    I was wondering if you had perhaps used the Japanese version of the Powerpuff Girls, as they are a bit older than the original cartoon.

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