• Member Since 30th Jan, 2012
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Whalesbefreeyo


Im Batman...err...Mare-do-well!

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(Formerly "Strange Love")
It started off as a completely normal morning for the mane 6, until they woke up. All six awake to find their opposite gender counterparts from a different universes in their beds. No-one knows how they arrived. Now with their opposite sex selves, they must discover why they are there and, if possible, how to send them home. Unfortunately there are many alternate universes in existence, some not very nice, some that have beings who would wish to enter the mane six's world and bring harm upon it.

This is a remake of my terrible fic "Limitations of Love" but without the villain sue Smiley. I would also like to say that I am in no way trying to rip off Connor Cogwork's "On a Cross and Arrow".

Character tags will be added as the story goes on.

Cover image is mine
( http://darkone10.deviantart.com/art/Across-the-Cosmic-Ocean-289491464 ) Higher resolution version here

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 514 )

Not bad ... tracking

258994
Thanks. I know its not great (not even close), but its nice to know someone likes it

It wasn't too bad. /track

That was good!

I think all you need is a pre-reader to catch those typos and what not. :trollestia:

259034
Thanks. I'll go through it and fix the typos.

My reaction when bubble berry came along; :twilightoops: ...

This... Is..... AWESOME! :rainbowkiss:

This pleases me:moustache:. By the way... there are almost no major mistakes whatsoever so I have no idea what you are fretting about :twilightsheepish:. Also when will your next chapter be out? This is like one of the best things I have read in ages!

259160
Not sure I would call it awesome. I'm surprised the dislike bar isn't at its maximum.
Thanks for the kind words though :twilightblush:

So if they have sex with their counterparts........does that mean their fucking themselves?

259171
I fret about the fact that I feel a story like this deserves better than me writing it. That and I like self-depreciating myself in the name of humor.
As for the next chapter I'm going to be working on it alongside revising my other story.

259185
I...think so
Now we can ask the question "Is it sex or masturbation?". The world may never know...

259176 Pah, better than mine. It's awesome. :scootangel:

259203
Thanks for saying that. But I still wouldn't call it awesome myself. Ive got a looong way to go before I can, if ever, reach that.

259199
Damn it now its my duty to find out.

So the other fic is cancelled? Hmm, alright not like it matters I find this to better anyway.
*Untracks the other one and tracks this instead.

259225
Oh it is better, still not great, but better. The other one was a putrid pile of crap...sprinkled with sewage and various diseases

259210 It's almost as awesome as On a Cross and Arrow :pinkiehappy:

259244

Thanks for complement, but trust me its not. Mr. Cogwork's work is far superior to mine.
Again thanks for the compliment though

Y U NO GIVE YOURSELF ENOUGH CREDIT!

259259
Cause I like self deprecating humor! And partially feel that way! :pinkiehappy:

259266
Eh its partially in good fun, since self deprecation makes me feel a bit more humble (not sure why). And partly cause I really don't feel like I'm a good writer, just a decent one.

259265
Not liking your own work and saying it is bad, to me, shows the qualities of a good writer, bad writers always just say they are "UMGEE RED MAH AWSUM FIK!" and your just like "No, i'm not really good enough to deserve your views, go and read something better..."
you > them

259275 It's featured. IT BEAT THE AWESOMENESS BARRIER. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

259279
Honestly i don't think it should be, I don't feel I deserve it to be.

Mine sure as heck don't beat the barrier either, I can tell you a few fics that certainly do though

259210 Hey mate, you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. You just need to brush up on your punctuation: that's the only fault I found in this story. I'm really enjoying this - can't wait for the next chapter!

259283
Nope! probably more people than there are Human in Equestria fics. which would probably be...wait for it.. OVER 9000!!! (you may kill me now)
WOOT for unoriginality! :pinkiehappy:

259278
Maybe.
Ive never had any delusions about being a great writer. Alan Moor, Lauren Faust, Neil Gaiman, THOSE are good writers. I'm just some guy who's decent ( I hope) and wants to tell stories that involve ponies.

259297
I probably shouldnt...but its too much fun to smash my own self esteem with a sledge hammer.

Also I'll take note of that. Time to look up examples of good punctuation!

259292
Even if their a Flamer I'm going to let them comment. I feel i should let them speak their minds. If they don't like it and flame me I'll just ignore them or take what they say into consideration for improvement.
Now, if they begin spamming I'll start deleting comments.

...Oh good lord I sound like a goody two shoes :twilightoops:

.......You sir need to not beat yourself up over this. It was an amazing read filled with memes and pony lore aplenty. Needless to say. I loved it. :pinkiehappy:

259323
I mean dude, really?
That is really Fluttershy attitude: Everyone saying that it is awesome, but you are constantly denying it...
This story is AS EPIC AND BADASS AS::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

It's already been said, but you should have somepony look over this before publishing it. It's good, tracking for sure, but you should have somepony look over it for simple grammar and spelling.

The Rainbow Brawl seems pretty in character...
As does the Pink Party Ponies.
Also, I think this is the first one where Spike and Barbara meet that I've actually seen.
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BOOK FIGHT!

Good so far... I tracked it at the mention of molestia :rainbowlaugh:

259346
Oh I know its not well written. As I have said many times before on this page I'm not a good writer. I'm at most, If even that, decent. I'm not going to delude my self into thinking its awesome cause its not.
Glad I could make you laugh though.

259358
LET THE BATTLE OF RECTANGULAR LITERATURE BEGIN!!!
EN GARDE!

259340
Oh but sir I must beat myself! Only then will the dreaded self esteem be removed!

259369
Yeah she'll be showing up in the next chapter, and few chapters after that.

Romance tag? Oh NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Aw, who am I kidding? This sounds awesome. Tracking :twilightsmile:

259348

eeeeeyeeahh, about that. I'm kinda anti-social sooo finding someone could be difficult.

Because of that, this must a be task I face...ALONE!!! *stands on windy mountain in heroic pose*.

"leer" means "to stare with a lewd expression."

The word you're looking for is GLARE.

259345
I deny it because i really don't feel I'm that good. If you ask me this story deserves a guy with better skills doing it.
Unfortunately your all stuck with me as writer.
Tremble in fear at the crapiness!! :pinkiecrazy:

259399
OH YES!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

259405
...Oh...WHOOPS!!

better fix that .

259402
NEVER! soon enough the vile beast that is my self esteem shall be SLAIN!

Interesting, gotta email track this.

And:

"a world where she was queen and everyone was Pinkie Pie."
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