Into the Forest

Lily is Bambi's daughter and is very proper and kind. Her friend Needles, Thumper's son, is a rebel and has enough curiosity to kill a dozen cats. When they find a new discovery, it flips their world upside down.

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21 Spots

21 Spots #1 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 2 · ·

Congratulations! First story submitted to the writing contest in Bambi Fans, and I have to say, I loved it!

I can definitely see more potential in this story as well. Perhaps sometime after the contest, when I have the time, I may be able to help you add more to it?

All in all, you've done a great job and this was a very good idea. Thank you for participating.

I hope to talk to you more in the future.

~Inspiring Faith~~

P.S. I also mentioned this story in a blog post here.

Shine

Shine #2 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 4 · ·

This story is awesome and well written,

Limelight02

Limelight02 #3 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 2 · ·

5651353 I would love that!

21 Spots

21 Spots #4 · Feb 21st, 2015 · 3 · ·

5651473 Well then, after the contest, whenever I have the time and resources, I will definitely help you out. Again, this story has the potential to be more than what it currently is, and I can see where a few additional scenes can be added in, and a few changes here and there. This could be great! Well done bud.

xXElite AlicornXx

xXElite AlicornXx #5 · Feb 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

A Bambi story?!
How cute!!
I am definitely looking forward to reading this!

Honeypelt945

Honeypelt945 #6 · Jul 26th, 2015 · 1 · ·

A nice well-written story, but I wish it could've been longer. This was actually the first Bambi/MLP story I've read, and I think we really need more.