A group of evil ponies called the rebellion are destroying Equestria. This is the story of the war hoping to defeat them and it's tragic outcome.
FYI there are spoilers in the comments!
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Why did fluttershy not care when Rainbow died,Also why did the group just let fluttershy and aj just die without helping?
Well, Fluttershy was a character I would have seen a bit more in shock by all of this. Even though she represents the element of kindness, she may not of had enough nerve to do anything. Fluttershy kinda provoked the rebels and when she yelled, the group didn't have enough response time. No other ponies were left to help Applejack leading to a more hidden death. Although Twilight and the CMC were there, Twilight went into a different room and the CMC stayed outside.
Oh :T thanks
I love dark stories like this!
5657977 You should read the sequel, The Cutie Mark Crusaders Trilogy.
Great concept, but it could have been much more detailed. It was hard for me to invest in the story because the pace was too fast.
This is possibly the worst piece of tripe I've ever read. Why? Explain! What is the rebellion's motivation? Why have they simply won without any kind of fight? of course the Doylian answer is that you wanted a particular set up, so you simply nerf anything that could prevent it, the shoddiest kind of writing.