A general of the kings army was on the brink of death until he awoke in Equestria strapped down in a chair in a dark room to find a tall pony standing over him who offers him a job but little does he know they have an infestation of monsters which he offers to kill he soon becomes a bounty hunter but becomes lonely will he find love will he survive the monsters or will he die
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will fluttershy be forever alone will twilight sparkle win the boxing match against applejack and win the title of best pony will the writer of this fic learn how to use punctuation and capitalization correctly or will every goddamn sentence be a two-paragraph run-on monstrosity find out on the next episode of The Warrior
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hold on whatever is this punctuation and capitalization thing you speak of i don't understand what youre talking about
Not counting the bad grammar, this story is pretty interesting.
I think I'll track it for a while and see how it goes
550292 indeed
Damned be the sun! I got excited when I saw the Black Knight picture from Dark Souls for your story.
...But now I realize you searched "knight" in Google and found it.
Dear: readers
I'm glad if you like this story and am open to hear suggestions on what to do and names for the characters
You need a prereader for the grammar.
559693 true true I personally hate grammar.
Grammar is better. Not professional, but a lot better than the last few chapters.
yay progress
Thanks I am going to get a small amount of time to write this week
personally I like it its pretty cool and seems like it'll be a good story.
560781thanks liaf
My bad on the grammar in this one I didn't have time to proofread
Sorry for taking it down my phone is horrible and thought that's what I. Wanted
Hey readers if you would like to make a turn of events in the story tell me does Alexander lose the wings or keep them its up to you I will tally the votes tomorrow and rest the case so yeah enjoy the vote just use comments if no responses he keeps the wings so yeah enjoy your voting
so wait what
He hasn't even gotten married to her yet or gotten pregnant yet so how can she have a kid or be in a wedding dress
The lady on horse back was his wife the screaming child represents his dead child and the skeleton horse was Celestia
The newest chapter may be edited and reuploaded tomarrow and then the next chapter may be up on saturday and if anypony wants to be an editor and has the time I would gladly send you the chapter to be edited
JESUS CHRIST USE MORE COMMAS AND PERIODS MY EYES ARE BLEEDING
K then sir
I played Diablo 3.
bam
661639. I can tell
662585 whens the next chapters?
-lavawing
673217 hopefully soon but I also have two other stories going
roman117, don't be a god damn hypocrite. Look at your typing!
"Jesus Christ! Use more commas and periods! My eyes are bleeding!" There you go, Mr.Roman.
woot ill be readty for this
Okay! So, first of you will need more commas and periods (like everyone else said). Next you will need to seperate speaches, do not clump them up into one paragraph. The pace of this story is rediculasly fast (slow down). Lastly, check your grammar; thank you, that will be all for now.
-XxRUSxX
I'm going to like it because it is so grammaticaly incorrect that it is retardedly funny!
-XxRUSxX
these run on sentances are screwing with me badly
these run on sentances are screwing with me badly
What the hell is this? Let me just jam this limb in here and presto all better and after waking up tied to to a tree by the being who took your ablity to fly and is carting your wing like a fucking trophy you just eh fuck it ill hold a conversation with em
cliffhangers the bane of my existence plus first
first
first
first
All I can say after reeding this is dam this shit good