• Member Since 7th Apr, 2012
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Kotatko von Drapek


Painis, in the ainis.

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For killing thousands, after the Earth's military experiments messed him up, he got sent into space, hoping that he will never come back. He found home on a desert planetary system, and after living alone for over one thousand years (thanks to the military), he recovered his mind, then got caught by a anomally and transported into Equestria. Will he find peace, or he will make war? Will he return? Noone knows.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 41 )

Also, i dont own Hasbro, because i nohasbro :( And no Friendships D':

please get an editor, good idea just needs to be refined more.

539269 i second that idea

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Note to self: Rednecks are still retarded.
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:rainbowlaugh::ajsleepy:

If it's in the far future why is he using contemporary gear? Give him a portable supercomputer not a bucking Android phone . As for weapons some blasters, lasers, plasma guns, stuff like that, not a Desert Eagle.

539723 Ill continiue on building this character, youll see why he has this old stuff... :twilightsmile:

539282 Ill do it when the weekend is here, school takes all of my time... :raritydespair::raritycry::twilightangry2:

Holy shit, people actually like it ! I thought that this'll get dumped with red thumbs far behind... Thanks for all of this guys ! :twilightsmile:

Also, any ideas for a cover photo?

So far I find the character and backstory for him a bit interesting cant wait to read more:twilightsmile:

540408 Good news for you, im starting the next chapter today, hope to make it in one day :ajsmug:, anyway i now have four days of free time (no school :yay:)...

here this is what i thought he would look like :twilightsheepish:


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edit: it wouldnt work so here

Note to self: Rednecks are still retarded.
this made me lol

general cum dumpster. riiiiiight.

This chapters quality is very poor, little too random.

551679 Sorry, but i was a lazy motherfucker and played Battlefield all day :ajsleepy:

548724 uuuhhhhh i dont see a duster (its a stand)


p.s. dont criticise it took ages to do:twilightangry2:

um sorry but im new to this how do you mark a story so you can read it later

seems like him and discord would be best friends

pretty good for your first try dude

Even for all the fucked up fuckedness this story contains as mistakes, mostly grammatical ones, I salute you for creating this wonderful piece of art.

Also, was that a hinting at a possible Cellyshipping?

Logging out.

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

771291 Also, thanks. Because you are probably the only one liking this.

778474

I tend to have diffrent tastes that every one else out there. Perhaps becouse I do not have tastebuds. But I digress.

And there is not enough CellyxHuman ships out there my good sir, so you have the full support of the Machine-God behind you if you pursue that venue.

Go ahead, do something outside the "flow".

Bronies were supposed to break out of the average joe stereotype by becoming bronies, we are we having the "stream of normalness" in here then?

Go ahead, do what you want, it's your fic. And if everyone else stops reading it? I'll still be here.

So do not fret and do what you think is right. Don't let yourself be confined by overused ways that a fic is supposed to follow.

Logging off.

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

778493 Thank's for your support, i WILL probably make another (short) story with CeleSam, but dunno. And because my grammar sucks, interested in pre-reading :pinkiehappy: ?

778509

Sure, just remember that I, the wonderful superior Machine-God, tend to procastrinate and divert my attention a lot, so I might have the outcome delayed by a bit.

But yeah, fire away.

I shall PM you the email you should send me stuff in a moment.

Oh, and try to add a bit into the story telling and descriptions, becouse dialogue alone won't get you far. Just a small though of input.

Logging off.

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

778603 Sure thing, ill add finally some plot to the story, not just slices of Sammys life in Equestria, that will get it to nothing. Probably something with Discowd or something like that.

Sorry guys, but this is a bit on hold. Im on a vacation now, and no time for writing. When im home at the end of the week, ill unleash the fury.

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