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Jet Lignite


Professionals have standards.

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This...is pretty interesting. I'll be watching you.

How far is one willing to go for the ones he loves?

All the way. All.The.Way

Hiking boots? Don't really think Spike would need those would he? He's a pretty tough guy.

Go Rainbow and go Spike! It's great to see a FoE fic where Spike is a hero instead of joining in the misogony. So now what are Spike and Dash going to do? Are they going to link up with the Changelings or Discord? Just how far will they go? Please, this is the Element of Loyalty and the No. One Assistant we're talking about!:moustache::rainbowdetermined2:

Update soon!

I spotted a typo.

Twilight packed the last of her belongings and was about to make her way out the door when Spike stopped her and gave her a launch bag.

"launch" should be "lunch".

Do you know what would be difficult, but interesting?

Making the Caribou sympathetic in some way. Giving the caribou some sort of character beyond "Rape all the women".

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Do you have any idea how many times I looked this over before submitting this!? Thank you for telling me and I suppose I can only blame myself.

What's worse is Fred found out and has become upset.

5727774 Believe it or not, there are canon fanfics that explain this.

good story.
How dose the progress look on the second chapter?

Are you planning to update this anytime soon? It seems ever since the first chapter its been poof Houdini! I would love to see a FOE fic where Spike is a hero. I would also like to see Discord and/or Nightmare Moon kicking some caribou butt.

Looking at the cover art on my phone I thought nightmare moon was holding a bag of nightmare night candy. I imagined she was swayed into helping with the promise of candy.

Good stuff, I'll keep an eye on this.
Also what happens if rainbow was chrysalis in disguise. Think about it, the guards said Canterlot was attacked but they never said by who. Changelings maybe...

An interesting start, though if the summery is at all accurate then things are going to go terribly wrong here soon. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

Wished this fic continued.
Wanted to see how would Nightmare Moon fit into this.

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