Shining is left alone with his thoughts about his little sister. And on this night he realises how important she is to him but he can't protect her anymore, he must learn to let go.
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I like MandoPony too. Not to sound like a grammar Nazi, but there was a lot of grammar mistakes in the passage.
Short but sweet, and nice poem of sorts at the end.
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Yeah I figured there was going to be a few. And you don't sound like a grammar nazi at all you're giving constructive criticism.
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The poem of sorts at the end is the first verse from Mandos song 'Shining Armour'
Thank you for the warm compliments, this was a spur of the moment story that I wrote in like 20 or so minutes.
You might wanna patch up the grammar and such... Otherwise, it's a heartwarming read
Felix, Felix, Felix. Didnt your parents ever tell you patience is a virtue. Shoulda waited.
Still a solid story, despite the errors
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Thanks for the warm compliment. I'm a rather impatient person and I had en editor who was going to proof read for me and he did an amazing job for one of my other stories but he's been busy with school work So I just put it up.
545545 lemme guess... Master_Somepony?
545554 No he's not my editor, someone else was doing it, my editor doesn't have an account on Fimfiction.
545563 odd that he commented on your impaitence before you even mentioned it
545604 Because I either mentioned it in one of my blogs, or I told him the other day, I can't remember which.
It's funny. I was just listening to this song, then I decided to come to FimFiction, and I see this.
Kinda ironic, huh?
545881 It's just an awesome coincidence i.imgur.com/eQ5Fr.png
Okay I should really close this tab. I need to get to work on my assignments.
Thank you everyone for the kind compliments.
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It's also ironic how I used the word ironic, and on the comments of another story that I went to after this one someone used the word ironic.
545960 Ironception?
545980 cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/19953523.jpg
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An awesome picture for an awesome situation.
I just realised I could have taken your profile picture.
My heart can't take the cuteness.
There were a few grammar mistakes, but the amazing writing helped me ignore those.
632799 You have no idea how big of a smile that put on my face. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
Seeing that comment was a great way to start the day. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Good story.
Something that seems flawed: Some paragraphs seem centered without reason. Other's MIGHT have been formatted that way intentionally, but I can't tell.