Just a little slice of life. A new pony comes to town and feels slightly out of place. This strikes the interest of Applejack and Twilight after our newcomer runs into the two of them. Anyway enjoy.
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Please excuse my mediocre mistakes. I'm trying. If I get enough views I will probably continue publishing.
i see some mistakes
this has potential try not to rush it and think out a solid story line scenario
Thanks. This was a sort of a spur of the moment thing aswell I had an hour before I had to go ice skating(like in the story) so I chucked this together for something to do. But yeah thanks you've given me some things to think about and an incentive to write out and publish another chapter.
Favorited for now. Shall be reading later.
And you might wan't to step down the commenting, now I have no idea if it bumps the story (as it usually does on other sides) but if it doesn't and I'm just being a dick...
Well...
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425613 I'm not even sure why I republished this story. I put it up then took it down again for unknown reasons. This was just a sort of trial story just to get me accustomed in writing in the pony fandom sort of way. My next story will actually have some sort of plot and be properly edited and all that jazz.
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Will be looking forward to it.
Wait so the incomplete status is correct or not??
It's not changing new one will go up as soon as I do the second chapter.
I know how you feel, man.
My classmates complains about writing 450 words, seriously! 450 words!
The only fun thing about it is their faces when I drop a 5000 word story and say it's the first chapter (pony related, mind you. My teacher was a little baffled at that) and they barely can produce a tenth of said amount.
Good times...
And I'm actually sad that this isn't continuing. It could be a really great relaxed and laid back fic.
444389 If you want me to continue it I will. I have it all bullet pointed in a word document somewhere. But my next story isn't going to get approved until I get the next chapter up. So until I get some solid inspiration to write the next chapter of that one I may just continue with this one.
And wow you only had a 450 word assignment
My teacher felt she was letting the class off easy with 1000. When she gave us the task sheet and it said 1000 I was like this will be so easy. Then I saw the faces of people around and their faces were sort of like this one 
Anyway i'm glad you enjoyed it. But you won't see more for a little while as I've hit a bit of a wall
444389 And I was thinking of giving my teacher my pony related story to edit for me. She's very emotional and loud and she will express openly. Like for our English assignment the best part of mine was probably the opening and she really liked it so after I gave her my draft the next lesson she came in sat us down and read out my first paragraph. Nothing weird about just reading it but the way she did it she was extremely loud and was waving her hands about.
She's also probably the worlds biggest grammar nazi
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Yes, only 450 words. Just happy to be on my way to... eeh... I think it's called High school in the states, I really don't know but I'm in eight grade right now.
Hopefully I'll get some bigger assignments there.
And I'm glad you're thinking about continuing with this fic. Makes me smile
446940 Only the Eight grade!
That explains the small assignment. And I thought you were at least one year older than me. Oh well online I've been mistaken for being 20 years old.
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With the beard I'm currently rolling and my height, I've been mistaken for a 20+ year old IRL several times. It's kinda awkward when I tell them that I'm actually 15.
Once, a new teacher almost threw me out of the classroom because he thought I was older than the rest and I refused to go. He had to go get another teacher to verify that I was where I was supposed to be.
Shit you're my age and you have a beard. I am lacking most body hair. Not that I really want any cause I've never really desired body hair but I would like to have a moustache
Oh well what I lack for in looks in maturity I make up for in attitude and intellect.