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I wrote every word of this, but it is quite possible that it bears resemblance to another story. There are over 70,000 stories here, after all.

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I just did a few quick story searches (using title and keywords), and I didn't find anything that I would consider "very similar". I'm certainly not saying that my story ideas are earth-shatteringly original, but I do take pride in my writing. It sounds like you're accusing me of plagiarism, or you're simply dismissing my work, at the very least. Remember, this is just a clopfic. If you're looking for deep storylines and amazing characters, look elsewhere.

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I'm glad to hear that your comments were not malicious, but it certainly SEEMED like they were. I don't think many fellow authors would consider your comments "off-handed", either.
Regardless, let's put all that behind us and move on. Please check out my other stories and let me know what you think. Cheers!

Wonder what Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are up to?

Not bad for what you've attempted to do, although it shows off the impracticality of m/f+ sex: there's only one dick to go around, so the rest have to either wait or help each other (they choose to wait here).

It was a nice surprise to see that second last chapter. I don't think I've seen filly AJ / colt Mac clop before.

First off, no spelling mistakes. Second, it was a little all over the place but you did well. Third good describing details.
But a lot of it seemed rushed or just short

It isn't the best but I do love your writing. I expect to see more from you soon

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Let's assume that Vinyl gets her itch scratched after the show.