Fluttershy-o is in trouble. . . Oh my-- Wonder who did that. . . Oops. Was it me? It can't be!
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Welcome to me. In here we will just do some stories that I make. Yep. That's about it.
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I don like this
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this 
You know, you can put like this:
This way is better:
Also, the punctuation is some kind of bad. And everything is rushed, and I also wanted to do a more longer comment, but would be too long just to show all errors. I got very punctuation errors. You need a editor guy, or the downvotes will come!
~Spectrum Shine
100,000,000 bits says Fluttershy's on top of you-know-who.
Spike claw bumps a brony "Gosh,
now this has some funny stuff going on!"
4918465
Well, I would've said : ' let's not start ', but, since you're already overthinking this *way* to much, I'll just say, he's doing fine on his own; he didn't ask to be corrected; and; if you're trying to ' help ', then, you should stop, because you aren't doing any good, by pointing out every fault you see..
Oh, Lord Almightly... some of the stuff in this is killing me laughing.... *gasp* you... *gasp* just got... *gasp* a favorite! *bursts into peels of manical laughter*
Hae
Yes! Another ship, my friend. A funny one, too!!!
4918465 I'm Latino.
this story my god
4918405 Wait
4918407 What
From first base to second base to third base and then bring it on home!!!!
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Woah.
This is...awful. I can't say it any better.
4958643 Ohey thanks.
Do you take Methylpropaline or Sybilmyprodine when you write these? I personally like taking Sybilmyprodine, as it makes the walls turn interesting shades of sound and move like the flavor of mint.
Oh no...
Help me...
4961211 It may seem surprising. But I do NOT take drugs? o.o
It's just me.---I think.
4961670
Well then I suppose I'll be the responsible adult in telling you this important life lesson: Drugs are bad... but sometimes, they can be really awesome.
Always weigh the risks before partaking of controlled substances; while a good trip is like visiting Smurf Village on a rainbow made entirely of skittles, a bad trip is like watching your family getting in the most face-meltingly horrifying and painful way imaginable.
Also, don't drink and drive - just drink and drink and drink... and drink. Then sit on your sofa and watch television - it's much safer.
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I like it so far...
" Y u du dat. "
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