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I can't believe I read that but still, upvoted for justice on bitch granny.
Incredible!
Although I wish Mac had to fuck Golden Harvest and Fluttershy had to be soaked with Mac's sperm gushing from Golden's pussy, then to clean up the mess with her tongue... The potential of the scene was great. Fluttershy was right beneath them, she was going to be forced to watch her lover having his first sex not with her. Big Mac could have problems with keeping erection, forced to imagine it's Fluttershy he's fucking... Such marveous opportunity lost!
The pissing scene was amazing. It's a step up from your previous works. With your other stories somewhat lacking in emotion and details, this scene (and the whole story too) clearly stands out.
I wonder what Fluttershy thinks about drinking piss now. Maybe she and Big Mac decided to try it again, privately, after drinking more liquid... and she learned to love it.
4479585 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.
Yes, I actually did write that scene, but for the 'April Showers' deadline I had to cut some scenes out to have the time to edit it and submit it. I will work on it some more, get it edited and add it later.
Glad to hear it, thanks for the feedback!
Well you know what they say, "It's always the quiet ones."
It switches between Golden Havest and Carrot Top randomly at points.
Im honestly not sure if thats a mistake, or an intentional use of it as a nickname. Official pony name changes mess with me, too.
4481343 Just going to say, I found at least one more instance of an uncapatilized 'golden Harvest'. Might wanna take a look at all the names (I was your prereader btw, I tried to find them all for you, but I was more looking to see if your story was solid). Again, good luck in the contest.
The setup is impressively stupid even for porn. Let's accept that Carrot Top is somehow an aggrieved party (though no evidence for actual fornication seems to have been heard by the kangaroo court here). But how in Equestria is any of the ensuing circus supposed to even contribute to making her whole?
That being said, the actual action is kinda hawt, so I'm not really complaining ...
4483655 Thanks! Yeah, that was my own confusion during early writing trying to decide which name to use-- when I decided on Golden and against Carrot, but had already writtten down carrot top, I didn't manage to go through and change them all. But I fixed it now.
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Again, Thank you so much for proofreading for me and for all your feedback. I went back through and fixed the capitalizations. Hope you enjoy the finished product!
4488579 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the action...
4479201 Hue I know, right?
Thanks for upping! 
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I don't suppose we could hear more about how Golden Harvest was punished, eh? Seriously though, the story was super crazy hot but it would still be cathartic to see Golden Harvest burn.
4489712 Well, my canon for this horsesex fic is that Flutty and Mackers are not vengeful about it, but for good old Clop's sake, I can look into adding a bonus chapter for this on that subject if you want... that is if I can even think of anything they can do to punish her that's any different from/worse than what yellow and red already went through.
4479585 Allright, added in extra scene, padded out existing scenes in more horrifying detail. Might still need some more work, but there you go. Hope you enjoy!
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Awesome!
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Vengeance is good, but proving there's no damage done is a major part of it.
I'd love a second chapter too, but I'd prefer exploration of Big Mac and Fluttershy's sex becoming crazy and perverted thanks to the "inspiration" provided in the first chapter.
This story was a whole new level of hotness.
I just changed my browser's default starting page to this website.
If voting was done in this contest, I'd vote for either this story, or Making The Rainbow Shine.
Will there be a chapter 2 at all?
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Well, that was something... Was Granny also watching when Mac wetted his marefriend?
While this was pretty graphic and I'm not a fan of analingus, the ending was sweet. They might have some terrible memories of their ordeal but at least they can work them out together. Also Granny got what she deserved!