Luna now sits on the throne of Equestria, and Princess Chrysalis rules beside her--perhaps a little too closely for Celestia. On another Equestria, Twilight Sparkle discovers some truths of her own.
With how she called out Chrysalis's name when she orgasmed. I think that's a little too late. Although if we're lucky she was just brainwashed into bucking Chrysalis. If not, then oh woe the poor soul who gets in the path of an angry Celestia.
I gotta give it to that mare, she knew what was going on way before I did.
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Cobblestone watched her for several seconds. “Superintendent?” “Hmm?” She kept her eyes down.
These paragraphs are too close.
Celestia cheating on Luna was unexpected. With her own niece. With a gift she bought for Luna. Celestia must be so disappointed with herself. So distraught over Luna calling out Chrysalis' name, she makes herself even more depressed when she realizes what she has done.
That crazy ass patchwork pony, Buffalo Bill, I mean, Eidolon's plan is... truthfully too convoluted to actually follow properly. Somehow steal Twilight's power to revive Coldheart? There is only one chapter left, anyway. I will find out then.
And yeah, Tia isn't in a good place right now, but then, neither is Luna. Seems like something has gotta give there...
Oddly, I never thought about the comparison to Buffalo Bill. It's there now that you've said it, at least on the surface, but...yeah. Huh. I promise that Eidolon's plan comes together in the last chapter. I've been intentionally vague with the character as to not give away too much. I've had one person figure it out and tell me directly, because I have been dropping odd hints here and there, but I was trying to keep the character in the dark--at least for now.
I hope that you are enjoying the story, anyway. For some reason, readership is way down on this "book." I don't know whether people are getting tired of the saga, or just have no interest in this particular one. Oh well.
5743062 Huh. I've been getting several people telling me that they aren't getting updates on this story in their timeline. I even talked with an admin about it, and they have no clue what's going on there, either.
Seems to be an odd glitch with this particular story. Go figure.
>“This courtroom will come to order. You may be seated.” The sharp bang of the gavel against the hard wood of the Judge’s desk served as the final indicator for the ponies of the room to sit down and wait for instruction.
urp you did it again...
ok so im gonna need some help here as im just as lost and cobblestone , what was all this about celestia having some reason to make twi an alicorn to enable her to get closer to coldheart? twi was still a unicorn by the end of that book and coldheart was no more...... and how could anypony possibly know something that was happening across the other dimension? weren't there no one who went between the worlds except for twi in between the coldheart invasion and now?.... this mystery creature that still has an obsession with coldheart still remains a mystery to me.....
the chrysalis from new equestria was destroyed by the eoh right?....
why did celestia sex cadance?.....
5738882 the hell do you mean there's only 1 chapter left :l ?....
5745683 freaking nom still ending your post with that pinkie smile even when the post is how your followers aren't getting your updates in their feed.....
Actually, Chrysalis (then called Toy) was very much alive after her confrontation with Trueblood and the EOH. She escaped and they don't know where she's at. Husk went looking for her with Ditzy in tow, and Twilight even asked about her when she first got to Trueblood's world. Hmmmm...
And I can't help it. I'm a happy person. I LIKE ending what I say with a smile. It's just my nature. Go figure.
Oh, and I've never actually seen/read any of the Phoenix Wright stuff. The only place I know it from is the meme. Don't know if that really matters in any way, I'm just sayin'...
Addition: no pony saw the dark alicorn on the balcony of celestias room. She cast one last glance inside and took off towards her old home in the forest that is now called Everfree
Damn it ... Luna don't do this to Celestia not after she went to tarturus to get you back… *sigh waits for next chapter*
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With how she called out Chrysalis's name when she orgasmed. I think that's a little too late. Although if we're lucky she was just brainwashed into bucking Chrysalis. If not, then oh woe the poor soul who gets in the path of an angry Celestia.
Extra space.
These paragraphs are too close.
Celestia cheating on Luna was unexpected. With her own niece. With a gift she bought for Luna. Celestia must be so disappointed with herself. So distraught over Luna calling out Chrysalis' name, she makes herself even more depressed when she realizes what she has done.
That crazy ass patchwork pony, Buffalo Bill, I mean, Eidolon's plan is... truthfully too convoluted to actually follow properly. Somehow steal Twilight's power to revive Coldheart? There is only one chapter left, anyway. I will find out then.
~KBO.
5738882 Thanks! Fixed.
And yeah, Tia isn't in a good place right now, but then, neither is Luna. Seems like something has gotta give there...
Oddly, I never thought about the comparison to Buffalo Bill. It's there now that you've said it, at least on the surface, but...yeah. Huh. I promise that Eidolon's plan comes together in the last chapter. I've been intentionally vague with the character as to not give away too much. I've had one person figure it out and tell me directly, because I have been dropping odd hints here and there, but I was trying to keep the character in the dark--at least for now.
I hope that you are enjoying the story, anyway. For some reason, readership is way down on this "book." I don't know whether people are getting tired of the saga, or just have no interest in this particular one. Oh well.
5743062 Huh. I've been getting several people telling me that they aren't getting updates on this story in their timeline. I even talked with an admin about it, and they have no clue what's going on there, either.
Seems to be an odd glitch with this particular story. Go figure.
>“This courtroom will come to order. You may be seated.” The sharp bang of the gavel against the hard wood of the Judge’s desk served as the final indicator for the ponies of the room to sit down and wait for instruction.
urp you did it again...
ok so im gonna need some help here as im just as lost and cobblestone , what was all this about celestia having some reason to make twi an alicorn to enable her to get closer to coldheart? twi was still a unicorn by the end of that book and coldheart was no more......
and how could anypony possibly know something that was happening across the other dimension? weren't there no one who went between the worlds except for twi in between the coldheart invasion and now?....
this mystery creature that still has an obsession with coldheart still remains a mystery to me.....
the chrysalis from new equestria was destroyed by the eoh right?....
why did celestia sex cadance?.....
5738882 the hell do you mean there's only 1 chapter left :l ?....
5745683 freaking nom still ending your post with that pinkie smile even when the post is how your followers aren't getting your updates in their feed.....
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This phrase usually means there is only one chapter left.
5747079 op didn't catch that bit , nooooo this can't be the end :c ....
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Actually, Chrysalis (then called Toy) was very much alive after her confrontation with Trueblood and the EOH. She escaped and they don't know where she's at. Husk went looking for her with Ditzy in tow, and Twilight even asked about her when she first got to Trueblood's world. Hmmmm...
And I can't help it. I'm a happy person. I LIKE ending what I say with a smile. It's just my nature. Go figure.
Oh, and I've never actually seen/read any of the Phoenix Wright stuff. The only place I know it from is the meme. Don't know if that really matters in any way, I'm just sayin'...
5751595 PAST 10PM AND NOW YOU REPLY NOM? DANMIT ALL I SHOULD BE ASLEEP RIGHT NOW....
ok....
aww man that's too bad , that franchise is great.....
Hmm, and the plot thickens. Let's hope they don't manage to release Fantasia Lovemuffin.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Addition: no pony saw the dark alicorn on the balcony of celestias room. She cast one last glance inside and took off towards her old home in the forest that is now called Everfree