5666110 Fixed that tail! Thanks. :D

And yeah... Just me being dumb. I have no idea how I missed that on Apple Bloom.

So Chrysalis has been using her mind magic on Luna? Or is it a residual effect of when they were all under that emotional manipulation drink? Also what game is Fleur playing at?

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You're welcome, and it's a common mistake. People see AJ's name is one word (named after applejacking) and think that her sisters name would be one word too for some reason. It's all good though, it's good to see this fic updated . Still wondering why the EoH would save magic stolen by Tirek, but would allow stolen souls to be kept by their captor. But all in all, this series is awesome.

There was little to dim the echo, as the room only contained a table with two chair and the bed that she was currently using.

"Chairs."

“Have you never had pancakes and hay fries together?”

Two different starches? In one meal? Are you insane?

Please, stay and having some breakfast.

"Have."

...but experience over ruled and she kept her face down...

"Overruled" is one word.

That don’t sound nothin’ like what you’re sayin.’”

The apostrophe should be before the period.

...she had no desire to scold the leaves, after all.

"Scald."

I thought that Eidolon was going to be Eris. I was very wrong, but almost not quite. I mean, they are both patchwork creatures.

This chapter was quite good, you really do paint a beautiful picture with your words. I look forward to the next.

~KBO.

“I do believe this is a first,” Luna said with some pride. “All four of Equestria’s princesses sitting together at the same table.”

Did Luna forget about Twilight? She is an alicorn so it is a good bet they also made her a princess of Equestria. Or I could be wrong and in this universe she is an alicorn but not a princess.

I agree with Twilight's opening statement. There is no evidence against her, only theory. What good is theory when she has the truth, and can probably show her memories in a video feed of sorts, with an unbiased pony investigating the spell to confirm that it isn't an illusion. ...Sorry for the spiel.

>“If the room would come to order, please.”
>immediately starts playing in head

>He walked a few steps and then turned towards the bench once more, shrugging his shoulders slightly.
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FUCKNG DANMIT NOM NOW I CAN'T NOT SEE THIS AS AN ACE ATTORNEY CASE.....

>“So, why are we here? She’s a hero. Recognized as such on two worlds.” He nodded and then slowed to a stop with a twist of his head. “Except for the alicorn part. Where did that come from? Unless…”
>His tone changed, hardening as he stood slightly taller.
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>“Twilight Sparkle was present at the defeat of Fantasia Coldheart.

FUCKING DANM YOU EDGEWORTH AND YOUR FUCKING LOGIC.....

>The stallion changed positions once more, staring directly at Twilight.
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>“We put it to the court that Twilight Sparkle is not Fantasia Coldheart—yet. That a moment before her demise, Empress Coldheart transferred a fraction of her own power into this mare, and has begun to slowly transform her into a new vessel to contain her evil. That Twilight Sparkle is the living embodiment of Coldheart’s legacy!”

dang , how come you gotta always make chrysalis the biggest agitator ever in every encounter with another living thing she has?....

also where did the next update come from? i never saw it in my inbox but yay i have another chapter to go read now.....

What did you expect, Chryssie, to ponies you don't matter if you're not a pony.

Yeah, it annoys me too that they did morning to commemorate chrysalis helping defeat Coldheart, but did commemorate Twilight's ascension.

Cya
Raziel-chan