Luna now sits on the throne of Equestria, and Princess Chrysalis rules beside her--perhaps a little too closely for Celestia. On another Equestria, Twilight Sparkle discovers some truths of her own.
And after reading this I must comment again. Oh Luna please don't be doing what I think you are doing... We've already seen Nightmare Celestia once if you are doing what I think you are this might be worse!
Why did this not show up in my feed? I follow you. It should have shown up in my feed as a new story. It only showed up in my feed because it was added to some groups I am in. I cannot read it now, though, it is late and I have work tomorrow. I will favorite and like simply because it is a Who Rules? story.
... Oh snap Celly needs Some Twilie stat, and poor trueblood, cant seem to get her own ponies to realize that Twilight is one of the good guy's, ungrateful bastids.
ok let's see what i'll be piling up to comment on this time....
so first , celestia stepped down from the thrown in the previous book? i don't quite remember that detail , ugh there's just so much character development in this series , to be able to take it from being at the starting point of the canon to having mother bucking celestia legitimately relieve herself of her duties as part of that character progression instead of it being something that the fic does just because that's what the fic is about/for or w/e , just wow.....
but what was with celestia being all concerned about their decisions for their arrangements with chrysalis? wasn't she the one who was pushing for it the whole time in the previous book while being all like 'it's fine it's fine dun worry about it'? so what's the deal with that?.....
oh yeah , and then celestia suddenly decided she wanted to be able to role reversal with luna at the end of the previous book too didn't she? god danm it's been like a year since the last update was made wasn't it? so much i've forgotten......
mmmm and it looks like some rather irrational shit is going on between luna and chrysalis yet again , gonna have to see what you come up with , im sure you wont disappoint......
also good job on being like 1 of the 3 ppl to add something to my group , but there isn't any doming of celestia in this yet , in fact she's the only one who does the briefest mention of doing any doming :l ....
oh yeah and isn't that another point of not making any sense? shouldn't everyone in trueblood's world know who teoh are , or at least who twilight is? why would they suddenly 1 not care that she helped save them , and 2 forget that there were other alicorn princesses that ruled them that weren't assholes before coldheart?.....
5530290 Yeah, there is a LOT of stuff that has happened over the various stories. I know it can be hard to keep track of. Thanks for sticking with it.
As to a couple of your points:
- Tia did step down at the end of Circles, which is where she and Luna also switched the D/s roles.
- And Celestia might not be having a problem with Chrysalis being a princess as much as she has with what is happening personally around her right now...
- Yeah, I know that Tia isn't being dominated in this story, but it's part of a series where it happens a lot, so it would seem odd to leave this chapter out. (Trust me, too...)
- As to Trueblood's world: There has only been one Alicorn there for centuries, and that was Fantasia Coldheart. She wasn't the most beloved of figures--by most--and there is a bit of a backlash happening there. It will become much more clear in the coming chapters.
5530883 right i see of course oh it was for centuries? i thought just decades at the most , you gotta develop the lore of the new equestria world more , actually that's another point right there , why is that mirror world calling itself new equestria when default equestria would be the new one to them -.o?.....
[honestly I am uncertain of the fix of "aren't you are"] _______________
Yay! This series lives !!!! With Twilight's ascension (wonder why Tia is sorry for that), her role as Protector / Hero of New Equestria (having united the NEqu EoH, helped fight the battle against Fantasia, and her basically being one of the ponies that helped make New Equestria what it is now) is seriously bucked.
I get that after Tia and Luna were murdered (why haven't they been reborn as Selene was reborn as Luna / mentioned that when one dies, another is born?) their only Alicorn was a meglomaniacal, obsessive, mass murderer for centuries. But there must have been some lore that showed that before the darkness that is Fanatsia Coldheart, the good the Goddesses did, right? To think that after all Twilight's done for them, their ready to lynch her simply for existing.
As for Luna's eyes ... why do I have the feeling that much like Chryssie and Shining Armor when she was feeding off him while Cadance was tossed into a deep, dank, cave, and starved / probably tortured. So she could feed off his love and gain power. I feel that she's doing the same to Luna. The teal glow reminds me of how SA looked in the Canterlot Wedding ep. I have a rather bad feeling about it.
Still lovely chapter. And I'm eager to see how this story plays out.
This is either an incomplete statement, or a question with the wrong punctuation.
“Well well well, aren’t you are delightful.
You only need one of these.
“Well, what kind of host would I be to let my marefriend go hungry.”
It may be rhetorical, but it is still a question. Missing a question mark.
Celestia's mind is placing a false cuckold's horns upon her brow.... Or would it be a cuckquean's horns?
Trueblood is going to have to become an ascended Super Saiyan elevated alicorn herself to calm the ponies of their prejudices and fears. Or Twilight could bind her wings to her side and wear a dress to cover them in public. And, who knows, Twilight may just enjoy being bound up and walking around in public with bystanders being none the wiser to her predicament...
...I may, or may not, have accidentally triggered something in myself. Weird, or not.
On a completely unrelated note, I have to take care of something...
As to why there hasn't been anyone reborn in "New Equestria," well, I tried to explain that at the end of Shattered Hearts. Basically, it's the same reason there wasn't one reborn while Luna was Nightmare Moon and banished. She was still alive, and therefore didn't need replacing. The same is true of Coldheart. She has the Sun, Moon, and Love avatars in her, and while she's alive, they won't be reborn. That make sense?
Oh, and the ponies on Trublood's world are calling it New Equestria because they see this as a new beginning, with a new government. It's a way to distinguish the "now" from the Coldheart era. So, it has nothing to do with the fact that there are two worlds and two Equestrias.
Did not know that Coldheart took all avatars, I think that she just used the old sun, moon spell, while taking perverse pleasure from making the sun and moon being madly in love with her and then murdering them over and over again. Knowing that even the sun and moon themselves bowed to her magnificence (aka, delusional narcissicism). But how does taking them into herself work? I thought after death they incarnated into a new form ... I didn't know one body could hold multiple souls. That kind of makes Coldhearts inprissionmet seem a little tortorus for the two innocent souls within her.
And the "New Equestria" thing makes sense. Although I feel bad that Twilight's getting the shaft in that world. Poor dear.
5540608 It is torturous. It's not the natural process, and Coldheart was able to get the avatars to help her in transferring their essence to her using a powerful spell. (Actually, not unlike what happened with Twilight in the Season Four finale, honestly.) But that's what made her so powerful: she had three avatars inside her, combined with the perversive nature of the "Nightmare" magic that helped to warp her and corrupt her--and make her a BAMOFO.
I hope they get free of her someday. And I never really thought of that (both them passin magic, and Tirek eating magic Ability. Since after the Living Avatars of the Rainbow, World Healing Wave, all the magic / cutie marks returned to their proper place? You think the other two Avvatars will ever break free and come back as adorable filly avatars?
I have such a love hate relationship with both this, and the prequel. At times it makes me not want to keep reading, other times it makes me want to scream. I do hope that Celestia and Luna end up together at the end. It really looks like Chrysalis is trying to separate them for herself. I would love to think that it will end happy, but something in my heart tells me it wont. An excellent story, I believe it is one of the best I have ever read.
5566712 You aren't the first person to say this to me (the others via PM). It seems the addition of Chrysalis to this storyline has met with a lot of controversy.
For what it's worth, I have a plan and a direction and ultimately... Well, thanks for sticking with it.
And again, thank you so much for the praise. It's honestly quite humbling to be told that.
5567872 You're quite welcome, it takes a lot of skill to be able to bring that much emotion from words. I believe you deserve a lot more praise, it really captures my attention in a way that few works have ever done. I eagerly await the next part.
You pony assholes, Chryssie deserves get coronation immortalised in stained glass!
I just hope Chryssie isn't going to get booted out. And I think she might actually like her aide. I wanna see her hive integrate with Equestria, though.
Oh my gosh!
Yes,yes,yes,yes,yes!!!!!
And after reading this I must comment again. Oh Luna please don't be doing what I think you are doing... We've already seen Nightmare Celestia once if you are doing what I think you are this might be worse!
Oh boy.
WOAH-WA-JI-WOH-WA/A/A/A/A/A/A/A/A/A/A/A
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIID!
bitch finally did it.....
Why did this not show up in my feed? I follow you. It should have shown up in my feed as a new story. It only showed up in my feed because it was added to some groups I am in. I cannot read it now, though, it is late and I have work tomorrow. I will favorite and like simply because it is a Who Rules? story.
5526637 Thanks for the head's up. It seems that you aren't the only one having this issue.
I have no idea what is causing it, though.
Grrrrr...
... Oh snap Celly needs Some Twilie stat, and poor trueblood, cant seem to get her own ponies to realize that Twilight is one of the good guy's, ungrateful bastids.
ok let's see what i'll be piling up to comment on this time....
so first , celestia stepped down from the thrown in the previous book? i don't quite remember that detail , ugh there's just so much character development in this series , to be able to take it from being at the starting point of the canon to having mother bucking celestia legitimately relieve herself of her duties as part of that character progression instead of it being something that the fic does just because that's what the fic is about/for or w/e , just wow.....
but what was with celestia being all concerned about their decisions for their arrangements with chrysalis? wasn't she the one who was pushing for it the whole time in the previous book while being all like 'it's fine it's fine dun worry about it'? so what's the deal with that?.....
oh yeah , and then celestia suddenly decided she wanted to be able to role reversal with luna at the end of the previous book too didn't she? god danm it's been like a year since the last update was made wasn't it? so much i've forgotten......
mmmm and it looks like some rather irrational shit is going on between luna and chrysalis yet again , gonna have to see what you come up with , im sure you wont disappoint......
also good job on being like 1 of the 3 ppl to add something to my group , but there isn't any doming of celestia in this yet , in fact she's the only one who does the briefest mention of doing any doming :l ....
oh yeah and isn't that another point of not making any sense? shouldn't everyone in trueblood's world know who teoh are , or at least who twilight is? why would they suddenly 1 not care that she helped save them , and 2 forget that there were other alicorn princesses that ruled them that weren't assholes before coldheart?.....
5530290 Yeah, there is a LOT of stuff that has happened over the various stories. I know it can be hard to keep track of. Thanks for sticking with it.
As to a couple of your points:
- Tia did step down at the end of Circles, which is where she and Luna also switched the D/s roles.
- And Celestia might not be having a problem with Chrysalis being a princess as much as she has with what is happening personally around her right now...
- Yeah, I know that Tia isn't being dominated in this story, but it's part of a series where it happens a lot, so it would seem odd to leave this chapter out. (Trust me, too...)
- As to Trueblood's world: There has only been one Alicorn there for centuries, and that was Fantasia Coldheart. She wasn't the most beloved of figures--by most--and there is a bit of a backlash happening there. It will become much more clear in the coming chapters.
5530883 right
i see
of course
oh it was for centuries? i thought just decades at the most , you gotta develop the lore of the new equestria world more , actually that's another point right there , why is that mirror world calling itself new equestria when default equestria would be the new one to them -.o?.....
all (?)
or
delete.
[honestly I am uncertain of the fix of "aren't you are"]
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Yay! This series lives !!!! With Twilight's ascension (wonder why Tia is sorry for that), her role as Protector / Hero of New Equestria (having united the NEqu EoH, helped fight the battle against Fantasia, and her basically being one of the ponies that helped make New Equestria what it is now) is seriously bucked.
I get that after Tia and Luna were murdered (why haven't they been reborn as Selene was reborn as Luna / mentioned that when one dies, another is born?) their only Alicorn was a meglomaniacal, obsessive, mass murderer for centuries. But there must have been some lore that showed that before the darkness that is Fanatsia Coldheart, the good the Goddesses did, right? To think that after all Twilight's done for them, their ready to lynch her simply for existing.
As for Luna's eyes ... why do I have the feeling that much like Chryssie and Shining Armor when she was feeding off him while Cadance was tossed into a deep, dank, cave, and starved / probably tortured. So she could feed off his love and gain power. I feel that she's doing the same to Luna. The teal glow reminds me of how SA looked in the Canterlot Wedding ep. I have a rather bad feeling about it.
Still lovely chapter. And I'm eager to see how this story plays out.
This is either an incomplete statement, or a question with the wrong punctuation.
You only need one of these.
It may be rhetorical, but it is still a question. Missing a question mark.
Celestia's mind is placing a false cuckold's horns upon her brow.... Or would it be a cuckquean's horns?
Trueblood is going to have to become an
ascended Super Saiyanelevated alicorn herself to calm the ponies of their prejudices and fears. Or Twilight could bind her wings to her side and wear a dress to cover them in public. And, who knows, Twilight may just enjoy being bound up and walking around in public with bystanders being none the wiser to her predicament......I may, or may not, have accidentally triggered something in myself. Weird, or not.
On a completely unrelated note, I have to take care of something...
~KBO.
5532830 5532360 Fixes found and fixed. Thanks!
As to why there hasn't been anyone reborn in "New Equestria," well, I tried to explain that at the end of Shattered Hearts. Basically, it's the same reason there wasn't one reborn while Luna was Nightmare Moon and banished. She was still alive, and therefore didn't need replacing. The same is true of Coldheart. She has the Sun, Moon, and Love avatars in her, and while she's alive, they won't be reborn. That make sense?
Oh, and the ponies on Trublood's world are calling it New Equestria because they see this as a new beginning, with a new government. It's a way to distinguish the "now" from the Coldheart era. So, it has nothing to do with the fact that there are two worlds and two Equestrias.
5540437
Did not know that Coldheart took all avatars, I think that she just used the old sun, moon spell, while taking perverse pleasure from making the sun and moon being madly in love with her and then murdering them over and over again. Knowing that even the sun and moon themselves bowed to her magnificence (aka, delusional narcissicism). But how does taking them into herself work? I thought after death they incarnated into a new form ... I didn't know one body could hold multiple souls. That kind of makes Coldhearts inprissionmet seem a little tortorus for the two innocent souls within her.
And the "New Equestria" thing makes sense. Although I feel bad that Twilight's getting the shaft in that world. Poor dear.
5540608 It is torturous. It's not the natural process, and Coldheart was able to get the avatars to help her in transferring their essence to her using a powerful spell. (Actually, not unlike what happened with Twilight in the Season Four finale, honestly.) But that's what made her so powerful: she had three avatars inside her, combined with the perversive nature of the "Nightmare" magic that helped to warp her and corrupt her--and make her a BAMOFO.
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I hope they get free of her someday. And I never really thought of that (both them passin magic, and Tirek eating magic Ability. Since after the Living Avatars of the Rainbow, World Healing Wave, all the magic / cutie marks returned to their proper place? You think the other two Avvatars will ever break free and come back as adorable filly avatars?
I've been reading this story from the start and I just have to say it is may all time favorite
5544406 Wow. Thank you. That's amazingly kind. I'm humbled.
I have such a love hate relationship with both this, and the prequel. At times it makes me not want to keep reading, other times it makes me want to scream. I do hope that Celestia and Luna end up together at the end. It really looks like Chrysalis is trying to separate them for herself. I would love to think that it will end happy, but something in my heart tells me it wont. An excellent story, I believe it is one of the best I have ever read.
5566712 You aren't the first person to say this to me (the others via PM). It seems the addition of Chrysalis to this storyline has met with a lot of controversy.
For what it's worth, I have a plan and a direction and ultimately... Well, thanks for sticking with it.
And again, thank you so much for the praise. It's honestly quite humbling to be told that.
5567872 You're quite welcome, it takes a lot of skill to be able to bring that much emotion from words. I believe you deserve a lot more praise, it really captures my attention in a way that few works have ever done. I eagerly await the next part.
When pet isn't in the scene, all characters in the scene should be saying "where's pet?"
You pony assholes, Chryssie deserves get coronation immortalised in stained glass!
I just hope Chryssie isn't going to get booted out. And I think she might actually like her aide. I wanna see her hive integrate with Equestria, though.
Cya
Raziel-chan