The stress of consecutive days of constant working has tired the usually flamboyant mare. Luckily, Twilight is more than willing to comfort her marefriend, and she asks if there is anything she can do to steady Pinkie's pain. In response, Pinkie gives the alicorn an unusual request that Twilight is unsure she has the skills to complete this wish.
Entry for the "I have a dream!" Challenge in Twinkie Pie group.
Every story has a happy ending, you just need to know when to stop.
Too far.
5531301 I don't see it as too far. I'm well aware of when a story should stop and how I want my readers to feel at the end of the read. In fact, since you were the one to comment about it, I know I got the reaction I wanted from someone (you), and I got the other reaction I was looking for, as shown in my likes and dislikes.
My job is not to satisfy my readers. They are not the ones judging my story. My job is to simply satisfy myself and meet the requirements for my judges.
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony
This is quite the cute little story. I love shipping between the Mane6. Gives me an adorable sense of love.