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It's Hearts and Hooves day in Ponyville and everypony is spending the day with their special somepony. Pinkie Pie not having a special somepony still manages to keep her usual up-keen attitude during this day full of love and affection! However, not everypony is happy during this day. But, being the 'problem solver' she is, Pinkie Pie knows what to do to brighten up anypony's day!
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Nooo.... more twi x girl stuff
5678534 Very simple, just don't look at it, if you like straight stuff go look at it. I don't like to read straight stuff aside Dislestia, but I don't comment things like that in the story.
I don't read so much Twinkie, but this was sooo cute! Good work!
Yeah! Another one to add to the collection! Okay, before I get started on my reading journey, I want to point something out to you.
I noticed this sentence has a double subject. By this, I am referring to the 'Pinkie Pie' and the 'she' after the comma to break of the incomplete participle. This is incorrect, as it reads pretty much like this:
That doesn't sound too pretty, but it's okay! I have two solutions to this problem!
First solution: you can remove the 'Pinkie Pie', and it will be automatically fixed. Easy Peasy! It will look like this:
Or
Or, second solution: you can be epic and use esmarks in replace of the commas. This will allow you to keep the name and the subject while adding more flavor to your punctuation. Then your sentence will look like this!
Okay, that's it! So far so good. Simple, yet enticing, description. One one punctuation error to fix... oh wait, also the 'you' in the title has to be capitalized. Anyways, yeah, looking really good! Time to get to reading. Onward!
From hell, to you, and back again,
ST Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony
5678641 Thank you for the feedback my good sir, hope you enjoy the story!
how lovely
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Observe the wild Purplesmart in her natural habitat. So graceful. So majestic. Nature is so fascinating.
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MAJESTIC AS FUCK
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5679917 You are weird.
One word: D'aaww...
5681005 I know, and I revel in it.
Moderately.
Not like, Pinkie party level reveling, but more of a staid, calm, Gala type, quietly dancing amongst the comments and pondering the weirdness of myself and everyone around me.
5681339 I follow u for this.
5681373 Thank you!
i don't one thing, why was Twi happy Pinkie snuggle with her, Twi is lonely and thought it was one day, i think she would get happier knowing that her friend, i know Pinkie has feelings for her but Twi does not know, i think you shored of had it that Twi, says thanks but you don't have to force yourself and Pinkie says she's not and that she wants this
i think this because, if someone know i was lonely and that person pointed out she wants to be my GF then i would this she's doing it to cheer me up, especially if it was Pinkie who been know to go out her way to make people happy
also i love this story, it's sweet X3
Well it was entertaining. Good first story.
5678534 You're obviously new to fimfic
5689977 Couldn't say it any better my good sir.
I`m... rather dubious about this particular reaction.
Twilight does not seem like the type to go to bits like that. She`d obsess and bottle it up, sure, but crying? Well, she`d very likely do her best to avoid being seen crying, simply to avoid bothering her friends with her personal problem.
5681089 (keel's over dead with heart attack cause cuteness)
Everything happened way too fast...