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MythrilMoth


LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

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Well now that ended up being a lot naughtier than i was expecting. I approve.

Pretty good:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::moustache:

.......................Wow. O_o Let's hope the Rainbooms never hear of that or neither will she hear the end of it.

That was pretty hot. Seems Adagio has taken to some rump ridding.

How is this a sequel?

I initially had some trouble gathering my thoughts on this fic, but I think I've sorted it out and can put it thusly: I want to cut that casting guy's balls off.

Extreme? Possibly. I'll elaborate.

On one hand, Adagio is smoking hot, and if I were locked in a room with her, I'd want to do the same. On the other hand, that guy didn't give her nearly enough prep for it (she was fucking crying), and she didn't actually give him permission. Lack of refusal is not consent. So yeah, fuck that guy with a steel pinecone.

Yes, it's just a story, but it pushes my buttons. Anyway, the story itself was pretty good. Writing was solid and all that. I would've liked a bit more of a look at how she was feeling during the act itself, but it certainly wasn't bad. That comment about her having never done it with a human, despite all her time as one struck me as a bit odd, but that's a minor detail. Plus, that ending scene alleviates some of my rage, as I get the sense she's gotten into it, over time (yay). So, good story, it just prods at one of my sensitive spots is all (though I do appreciate the verisimilitude, as a lot of people (like that casting guy) do indeed show a lack of respect for proper ass handling). Nice work.

Comment posted by MuseoSansPony deleted Jan 19th, 2015

5522882 It's actually a sidestory. But FiMF doesn't have sidestory tagging. It has sequel tagging.

5522918 Thanks for reading and commenting. And yeah, the casting guy is supposed to come across as a total slimeball. The sad truth is, people like him exist in real life...

Well, I absolutely have to agree with Pretzel.
Totally.

Given the title and subtitle, about what I was expecting. I guess that Adagio's research didn't quite go into enough details about why Chocolate Pretzel (there's a double entendre name if ever there was one) liked bleached assholes.

...
*looks left*
*looks right*
*moves to locked collection*

Nice writing. slightly too graphic for me, but I'm a wuss:pinkiehappy:

And can't help but bust up laughing at Cloudchaser in the coverart. She's just like mmmmm yeeeeeaaaahhhhh. :rainbowlaugh:

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A lot of porn stars bleach around their assholes to make the skin tone lighter/match the rest of their skin tone. If you have light-tone skin, i'm pretty sure you've noticed that your skin is a little darker around your crotch region too.

Chocolate Pretzel, you lucky bastard...

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Not that I've noticed, myself; then again, I don't tan. Rather, I just burn. So I've never really tried tanning.

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Mmh. Well yeah anyway, that's your explanation of bleached assholes and why some-most porn stars seem to have perfectly good looking asses with no blemishes.

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Ahh. Here I was thinking that it was being done for some kind of sanitization reason.
:rainbowderp:

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Nah. Porn stars (or whoever is paying them) just think that the natural, darker tones of the crotch and anal region are ugly. And unfortunately, a lot of people here in the US watch porn and they see this and think Oh so its more natural to have asses to have the same skin tones as the rest of the body or something like that, and like they would caught surprise if they ever have sex with someone that didn't bleach their ass because they didn't know how to or were also... the thing.
It's weird. Let's just say there's a lot of misunderstanding when it comes to this.

5525280 That's...NOT why that region tends to be darker... :facehoof:

This actually made me want to eat a pretzel.

5523504 It should have sidestory tagging. then, all those stories that take place in the same 'verse I am making will have relevance

5531993 Maybe we should suggest sidestory tagging to knighty. As well as feed updates when a favorited/tracked story gets a sequel/sidestory...

I loved it. It was incredible. Not many fics here that actually have anything to do with Anal, good ones at that. And how sexy you made her out to be just added on top of that.

10/10 Thanks so much, get followed. :heart:

5537125 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Dayum, that was hot.

Whoa-oh-oh, whoa-oh-oh, you didn't know that you fell...

What a narcissist

For those of you looking for an Equestria Girls story with a focus on bleached assholes, your ship has cum come in!

Why do you prefer not to submit stories to Equestria Daily?

5557830 Because Equestria Daily has an attitude towards fanfics and fanfic writers that offends me.

finish your other story before doing a seqeal

finish your other story before doing a seqeal

finish your other story before doing a seqeal

finish your other story before doing a seqeal

5577381 Bésame el culo, pendejo.

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Hi guys. Sensing a little tension in the air here. From comments on both this story and a couple others by the two of you, it's kinda looking like y'all haven't been acting particularly friendly toward each other. It's probably for the best if you both either agree to be civil with each other or agree to stay away from each other (or, failing that, block each other). Better, at least, than continuing to prod each other, y'know? Escalating things could potentially require staff intervention, and probably nobody here actually wants that.

Have a nice day.

5578134 I've already blocked him. Which I probably should've done before he started with the spamming. So it's settled.

Most interesting fic. :rainbowwild:

Wow... that was almost sad. No, that ending was VERY sad. I actually feel bad for Adagio...

Well written Mythril Moth... well written...

I was drawn here by the alliteration in the title. Seriously, try saying that five times fast.

But aside from that, what the heck is the appeal of a bleached anus? I seriously don't get it. Do you actually use bleach? Isn't that harmful? What does it even do for you? I have always wondered these questions.

5611086 There's this wonderful thing called Google where you can research things like that. :raritywink:

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There's this wonderful thing called a brain that's a lot more sophisticated than a computer, and clearly you don't know how to use.

Google can't give me what I'm looking for. I need opinions, which oddly enough, computers don't have. I want to know the appeal of a bleached anus. Why humans would choose to do it, and for that I need answers provided by humans who know, and can answer my question. Looking for a website on Google is going to tell me how the process is done, but might not give me the answers I'm looking for. If I thought Google had what I was looking for, I'd have gone there. Thanks for being an asshole, mind sucking my dick while you're at it?

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There's this wonderful thing called a brain that's a lot more sophisticated than a computer, and clearly you don't know how to use.

That was completely uncalled for. :ajbemused:

And FYI, Google CAN, in fact, direct you to articles about the subject of bleached assholes and why women do it. All you have to do is type in:

why do women bleach their assholes?

There was absolutely no call for you to insult me and behave like an unbleached asshole.

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