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My Life

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It's the numbers. Always the numbers. You always get a number before your cutie mark. Then, only then you get your name. I'm a orange pegasus with purple mane and tail. My number is 046.

Chapters (3)

My Sucky Life · 9th Jan 2015 · 575 words
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The Nightmare · 14th Jan 2015 · 577 words
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School · 21st Jan 2015 · 246 words
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Cheesey Microwave

Cheesey Microwave #1 · Jan 15th, 2015 · · · The Nightmare ·

Uh... I think you mean "wimp", not "whim".

SkaterStreak

SkaterStreak #2 · Jan 16th, 2015 · · · My Sucky Life ·

I like this so far but I feel like the intro is a bit short Don't let the small mass of Dislikes get you down.

Comment posted by Smileplays deleted Jan 21st, 2015

Gial Ackbar

Gial Ackbar #4 · Jan 17th, 2015 · · · The Nightmare ·

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There is really no need to delete it. Even with a lot of downvotes, the story also got some upvotes, so at last some people like it. Better try to make some improvements, expand it, and use more time to show what this story is actually about. Currently, the story is to short to get interesting, but I’m sure you can improve it.

Also, you might want to tag the story as "alternate Universe", as it does not take place in the Equestria we know.

HapHazred

HapHazred #5 · Feb 22nd, 2015 · · · The Nightmare ·

Reviewed the story. Like for A Very Apple Secret, I'm rejecting this story from the Olympus library. Again, the writing level is substandard and needs a lot of improvement.

Review is here.