Starswirl's Stars.

Ever since Luna came back she's always wanted a celebration just for her. So she gets an idea for one perfect celebration.

Inspired by the art piece and the music by Evening star- Beautiful Night.
Click here for song.

Second: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/243431/starswirls-stars-2-the-celebration [img]http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/l/mlp-ponydesigner.gif?6[/img]

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Elkophys

Elkophys #1 · Jan 19th, 2015 · · ·

1st.
This story is way too fast for me :(
2nd.

"Oh they're already in Canterlot preparing for the celebration." Twilight said before looking up at the clock in SugarCube Corner. She squinted staring at the ticking hands. "ITS NEARLY 5:30! HURRY GIRLS!" they darted to the train station moving through the busy crowds of Ponyville. Fluttershy caught sight of the train station sign.

Where did Shy come from? o_O
3d.

Luna was thrown into her room and with a slam the door was locked.

Imagine: you are Princess of The Moon; bucking alicorn Goddess; and suddenly, while you are arguing with your sister (another damn Goddess), three bastards grab you and throw into your room.
The only thing I can come up with - three dead bodies on the floor. Or four dead bodies.
4th.
Why is Luna such a freak?
What' wrong with her?

I can imagine that Pinkie is just too exited, but Luna...
5th.
While I was reading this, I thought about teleportation spells. Because I don't now how to explain this:

BAH!
Twi in Sugar Cube Corner.
BAH!
Twi in Canterlot.

6th.
I always thought that that pink colored building is named Sugar Cube Corner (3 words), and rainbow-maned pegasus is Rainbow Dash (2 words). Correct me if I'm wrong.
7th.
Usefull link

8th. (Main Part)
Keep writing.

~elkophys

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