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The Story Man
I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.
The Story Man
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I'm already done reading. It's amazing how fast a story can go from good to bad when you include second person.
Yikes.
5480029
There's a "You" in the Description.
Did you conclude it was good from the title only to be disappointed by the desc.? You really should give it a try at least.
Meh....I out grew second person fics but I will give you the like
5480029 It's amazing how fast a person can go from neutral to asshole when they criticize something very minuscule such as personal preference.
Dayum
5480049
I don't enjoy second person as a genre, anyway. I just wanted to be an edgelord and see if I got any downvotes. Apparently not. If I were to elaborate on why I dislike the second person genre, the simplest way I could think of doing so would be thus:
No, we're not.
Even if we were, it wouldn't be.
If my SO said she was seeing fucking mythological creatures at school, I'd take her seriously.
I wouldn't.
Do you see where I'm going with this, man?
EDIT: nevermind, the downvotes came. Huzzah!
5480053
You're right. Well done, man, I hope you feel proud after figuring that out.
There's a warning on my page and everything, bruh.
5480057 So instead of trying to imagine yourself in a situation, you rather be told what is happening? If you don't like second person stories, which is what he writes, why are you here?
5480065
I wasn't aware I needed your permission to go wherever I want on the internet. Excuse me, Sir. May I please view an online fanfiction website unrestricted?
5480065
Also, it's the opposite of that. A second person story is about "me", yes? Well, I wouldn't do any of these things, so the entire genre is already subjective. To date, I've never read a second person story and gone, "yeah, I can see myself doing that."
It's easier to relate to a well written character who has traits similar to your own, than it is to find a good story about "yourself."
5480080 Once again, this all comes down to matter of opinion. You don't like second person stories, so they are all bad and no one should like them. You are free to have an opinion, but I don't have to go along with it. I like second person stories and that is my opinion, but you don't see me going around bashing non-second person stories.
I was going to complain about the shitty second-person wish-fulfillment story, but then I saw the author bio.
Well, this is pure cancer.
5480099
Um, no.
Just because I don't like something, doesn't mean other people can't. I was literally just speaking my mind. At what point did I say, specifically, "None of you can enjoy this story because it is second person!"
I didn't. Maybe you should pay closer attention before you mount your high horse.
5480113 So I'm automatically on a high horse if I defend a story? Did I ever say I was better than you? No, I did not. If I'm on a pedestal, you are the one who put me there.
5480124
No, the "high horse" comment was from the fact that you told me what my opinion meant and what it was saying therein. You assumed on my behalf, therefore insinuating that you had a higher authority than my own.
Jeez kid, if you don't even understand yourself, how can I expect you to understand me?
5480134 I haven't told you anything besides what my opinion of your opinion. Instead of trying to attack me, why don't you look at what is really happening.
5480139
I'm not even attacking you, brah. I'm stating a damn point. You're the one who came onto me, not the other way around.
5480156
wowowowo im crei so much hrt
pls no buly
5480146 Careful now, swearing is not needed. It is a sure sign of immaturity, and for your other point, I "came onto you" because how a simple word does not ruin a story. It's like judging a book by it's cover.
Hooray for flame wars completely negating any and all potentially positive or negative feedback on a story... I'm still going to read it, but I would suggest immediately nipping these things in the bud in the future
I don't tolerate assholes dousing the comment section with kerosene and sparking a lighter just to make your story a flaming playground 
5480160 I got a tip for you bro. learn to spell. please
did you even watch it?
5480164
Yeah, and I never implied I wasn't doing anything but. Also, swearing? Fucking sweet Mary riding Jesus Christ's dick while cunting Noah cocksucks God, if 'damn' is a swear in your book, I hope your balls still exist.
5480171
I got a tip for you, "bro", use capital letters.
5480181 why should I. as long as what I say can be clearly understood. unlike your first comment to me after I posted the video describing you...dumbass
5480191
...Are you retarded?
5480180 And just like that you lost all traction in your argument. I was just advising against it, but you went ahead and showed off your inability to hold a reasonable argument. I thank you for your time, and I believe you know the way out.
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5480195 No. but your the Retard my friend. Hating a story just because its wrote in 2nd person. Does it even matter?
5480196
Okay matey. Have fun on that high horse of yours.
5480202 I will.
5480200
You're*
It's written*
5480200
Hate is a rather strong word. I think you mean "dislike."
I hate important things, like homos and muslims. Not stories.
5480203 ride it proudly my friend
5480204 thanks. ill remember that...jerk
5480205 Still. It's stupid to dislike a story just because it's written in 2nd person. If it's a good story. It does not matter what point of view it is in. Because either way it will still be a good story
5480212
What the fuck did you just fucking say about me, you little bitch? I’ll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals, and I’ve been involved in numerous secret raids on Al-Quaeda, and I have over 300 confirmed kills. I am trained in gorilla warfare and I’m the top sniper in the entire US armed forces. You are nothing to me but just another target. I will wipe you the fuck out with precision the likes of which has never been seen before on this Earth, mark my fucking words. You think you can get away with saying that shit to me over the Internet? Think again, fucker. As we speak I am contacting my secret network of spies across the USA and your IP is being traced right now so you better prepare for the storm, maggot. The storm that wipes out the pathetic little thing you call your life. You’re fucking dead, kid. I can be anywhere, anytime, and I can kill you in over seven hundred ways, and that’s just with my bare hands. Not only am I extensively trained in unarmed combat, but I have access to the entire arsenal of the United States Marine Corps and I will use it to its full extent to wipe your miserable ass off the face of the continent, you little shit. If only you could have known what unholy retribution your little “clever” comment was about to bring down upon you, maybe you would have held your fucking tongue. But you couldn’t, you didn’t, and now you’re paying the price, you goddamn idiot. I will shit fury all over you and you will drown in it. You’re fucking dead, kiddo.
5480234
;^)
5480239 look at the next video I posted to get my reaction
5480205 good point. but. my question now is. did you even read the story
5480239 Do you have proof? Just asking, not hating.
5480239 you seem to be a good person. I am sorry for calling you a jerk
5480261 Lol