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The Story Man
I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.
The Story Man
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Yah anther wonderful job I loved it my good sir u are like my number one fan on this sight excapt Visual pony u are awesome
5089641
Well shit, you're one fast reader.
5089667 yup read it when it comes out and downloaded it on my iPod for shits and giggles to read for fun when I'm boared
One small grope for man...
One giant sexytime for mankind.
Troll Celestia is best Celestia.
yez this story good
This is some good word porn
....that moment when fics like this have just become something to skim when no new fics or updates have come out
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Alternate ending:
While they were having sex, they accidentally activated the school intercom.
AHAHAHAHAHAH THE END THO
The story was sweet, adorable, and incredibly hot.
That last line, though...
5090038 Not sure if it's good or bad times....
Celestia is like "You had sex in my office, didn't you Luna?"
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5090264 THAT is amazing.
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Congrats for appealing to the lowest common denominator, on your way to the feature box.
Exemplary effort, my good sir.
*stares in disbelief* Did C cup become the new A when I wasn't looking? Really? This is . . . what?
Going by this, it isn't against Da Rules to sleep with an inferior.
5091419
What's a conspiracy?
5091455
Didn't really plan on playing to anyone. This was the result of a random request on /mlp/. The exact request was "something with a tired Luna", and so this happened. I am just converting these stories after all, I mostly write for /mlp/.
5091716
She's using hyperbole cause she's jealous.
5091733
Or maybe you're supposed to sleep with equals?
5091884 So you appeal to their lowest common denominator.
Gud jawb.
5091942
Of course, how else am I supposed to earn all this money and build a pool made of gold?
Remember, only sell-outs do requested stories.
she's on the smaller end of the breast size scale, probably a C cup at best.
C isn't small...
COFFEE! NO SEXY TIMES HERE! YUUUUUUUUP! *glances around nervously* Just coffee!
5091963 atleast you're honest :)
5091884
Oops. wrong GIF
That was some hot coffee
Wow, it's getting easier and easier to to get a clop story featured every day. In my honest opinion, this story wasn't bad per se, it just wasn't too engaging. Firstly, the second person POV is a major crutch, and that really turns me off. Generally speaking, it's better to write about someone of your own creation than to have the reader imagine themselves into the plot. The overuse of the words "you" and "your" gets tiresome after about three paragraphs.
In addition, the author abuses saidisms like it was going out of style.
"Somthing somesthing something!" character said, doing an action.
Character did an action. "Something something something!
The examples above will flow better most of the time. Trust me.
Don't combine the two, either. It's redundant to write thigs like
Character did an action. "Something something somehing!" (s)he said. [BIG NO-NO]
By stating that character did an action, the readers automatically assume that whatever dialogue follows will be character's words.
Hope this helped.
story man. don't let me down here
5092450
Admittedly, the title was pretty clever.
5092021 In real life? No. But in the equestria girls universe? The average size is probably somewhere around large Cs to small Ds.
As soon as I read aloud and saw the 'face' part. I immediately went, "Ohhhhhh, fuck..."
Love this story! Wish a chapter two was out.
5092756 It was okay. I've seen similar titles composed of a, more or less, dirty pun on the character's name.
5092769
Huh? What do ya mean? I sae the movie, and every girl looked like they had C cups, then again, it's been a while since I saw the movie AND I am not know by my memory
5091018 More like "You had sex in your office, didn't you Luna?"
My school starts a t 0700 hours but I used to come a around 0600
Loony lovegood, Luna lovegood...
Is this from Harry potter?
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The chapter name is a little nod to HP, yes.
5093619 True, but those girls were all still in high school, breast growth usually end when you're 18-21 years old.
Ha... I get the title... :P
5094826
U a fan?
Great story.
5095234
Not really.
I have read all the books, but that was a few years ago.
Great clop, and that ending made me smile, too bad its a one-shot
he he he my only thought at the end was
Nice one once again^^
I'm a little late with my comment this time
Um.......Shouldn't that be the first man ON the moon..?
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Since Luna is referred to as "the Moon" in the title it translates to "First man in Luna".
5095013
If they don't have bad luck, but I will give to you that one
I be like "I'm sorry Celestia, but flat is justice!"