All Cornelius wanted to do was live a normal life. He had friends, great parents, and he was even the captain of an airship. An airship that he designed himself. He was getting rich off of the income from his airship sales. He made his parents rich. He made his friends parents rich. It seemed as though life was perfect. But when the rule of Celestia and Luna is threatened , things begin to look bleak. A tyrant is threatening to rise, and Cornelius might be the only one who can stop him.
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Meh.
I like where this is going.
Keep up the good work.
I also want to point out that I love the concept of a Steampunk Equestria.
-Richard
Stampunk.
I is happy now
Keep going!
Tracking!
The song 'Civil War' by Guns N' Roses comes into play soon, doesn't it?
...Wow, didn't see that coming.
Can't wait for more! 
Unexpected events are... unexpected.
Right! So, this one is a bit short, but it just seemed like time to end it.
10 points to whoever can get what I was referencing with Shepard and Akbar. (two separate things) Don't give it away either. Just say if you got them or not.
I think I got the first reference but I'm not sure about the second one
I got them, man u I give you ten points for putting the Normandy too
Cliffhanger! U MAD!!!!!
Anyways, like I stated in my blog, give me feed back. Constructive criticism, tips for improvement, etc., etc. I had a TON of fun writing the action bits in this chapter ( by the way, that's the WHOLE chapter :P) and I'm really looking forward to writing part two! My following week is going to be a bit busy, but I'll try and squeeze some writing time in there. Stay tuned for the next installment of... oh forget that. Stay patient! I'll have the next one up sometime before July 10th if I can.
Hey, don't hate me cause I'm lazy, besides, you know you liked this chapter.
Well, here it is at last. I hope you guys enjoy it. Hit a few snags while writing this one but finally got it out. Sorry for the wait, and stay tuned for the next chapter. It probably won't get much longer than this, three or four more chapters. It all depends I guess. Peace out, and may the force be with you!
Anyone wanna take a gander at the connection between 'Stalin' and Iron Curtain? There is a specific reason I gave the captain the name I did. Anypony know? Anypony?
Is anybody still reading this? If not I may cancel it or put it up for adoption or something. Throw a comment up if you're still reading.