When a colt by the name of Inkwell comes into Ponyville out of a major Canterlot university, he goes to Twilight looking for a job. But all is not as well as it seems when she gets to know him better. It turns out he has had a rough time coming out of college and needs help desperately.
I got the idea for this character from a guy on youtube who does colt versions of a few of the scenes from the show.
Link to the video I got the idea from: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2U-vPPzSdeY
This is my first story so, we'll see how it goes.
Chapters (8)
Good so far. few mechanical errors. Nothing that takes away from the story.
Let's see
Stalin is not sure Spike shal greet somepony this way. He is kinda lazy, but, well, whatever.
Overall, spike is a little bit out of character here, but it's ok
OC have a character, this is good. Althou he is not very charismatic now.
Overall: interesting. Really worth a reading, in Stalin's opinion. Keep the good job!
311728 If you would, could you point out the errors, I'd very much like to fix them. Thanks.
Short but great
314943 Don't worry, there's more to come!
This isn't too bad, tracking :)
SUCKER PUNCH!!!!!
so another book coming?
good.
3349934 Another book is here! In the form of Steam Tyrant. Though these are some of my older stories. Therefore, the layout and logical sense involved in some things is... not there.