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Outsider


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In the deep recesses of the Everfree Forest, an odd creature is awakening which will set in motion a prophecy long forgotten...


Also any criticisms are greatly appreciated as this is my first time writing anything... ever.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

this type of confusing fanfics are always welcome
keep goin mateeeeeeeeeee

Where is Isaac...and why is he not being bound?!

I love this idea a freaking story about a person going around scaring people? that sounds very interesting, keep up the good work :pinkiecrazy:

This is... Unique I will keep reading to see how it turns out.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes...
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204461 Well then you sir are in for a treat! Not only will the next few chapters be undoubtedly cliche and ruin what little story there was, but I don't even know what made this story passable in the first place!

i need more get to work on next chapter so i can get my fix

It's not as bad the author makes it out to be. i can already tell the influences used when writing this fic. It needs some help with syntax, formatting. grammar, but i'm no english major. a lot of run on sentences.

Amnesia was big part of this.. My only glaring problems with the fic is that main guy talks to himself too much. How do you not realize or limbs are different

Peace Out.

agg updates wy u so slow btw im glad this story is not dead

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Sorry about taking so long with chapters, I was distracted with other things (as well as starting a newer story, which you might see the first part of by the end of this month) but I will try to make the wait between this chapter and the next much shorter. So once again, I'm sorry about being so slow, and at the same time, I'm glad someone enjoys my writing.

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