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This story is a sequel to She's Dazzling
" Her very being seems to shine with a soft, tremulous light; her eyes so honest, so pure, it's sweeter than the very turbulent feelings I feed off of. To watch her face write pure, raw emotion is the definition of bliss itself. "
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*squee* This. Is. So. Gooood.
I can't wait for the sequel to this sequel.
It's going to be amazing! 
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I sure hope so haha! I'm glad you liked it, thank youu
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And perhaps I am hinting at that - you'll see! Thank you so much~ 
Haha thank you?
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Aww, that's alright - thank you for the comment now haha! And keep rambling, I really appreciate the effort you put into your comment. I hope I don't disappoint
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Thank you, thank you
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Well...yay! I'm happy you're as excited as I am! Haha, thanks
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyes!! Oh my goodness! This is amazing! Moar! (pwease
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aha thank you!
Most certainly
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But I'm taking it that you enjoyed it, so thank you anyways~
Sorry for the dilemma
And yes, RariJack will always be #1 otp hahabeautiful. simply beautiful.
If I had a bouquet of roses, I would throw it towards you.
wonder if Sunset would do something like that...
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Why thank you, kind sir *accepts the bouquet*
Adagio would be drowning in roses!Awww! It's so cute!
You making me like this ship a lot! Here, have a taco Sonata, you deserve her:
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Now go and make a sequel for this sequel!
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Oh yes. You are slowly slipping under the SunDagio spell, and you don't even realize it!!
I-I mean..
Haha but all jokes aside, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! And I will definitely be getting on it /salutes
Thanks!
*flails* THIS IS SO AWESOME!
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And you're awesome! Thanks for reading
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Thank you! I cant wait for the next! I'm slowly dying of anticipation.
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*gasp!*
Please don't die!!!
...
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I'll try not to
Very glad to hear there's more on the way. I don't have ideal words to describe the character building approach here, so I'll just reiterate that I'm eager for more. =)
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That is perfectly fine
Thank you very much!
You've grabbed my attention with both of your stories on two separate occasions. As in, both times I was just surfing through the recently approved stories and was unknowingly drawn to a story made by you, TWICE. To top it all off you've only MADE two. I think its safe to say I will be looking forward to any future fics made by you. Have a Fluttershy
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I will accept this Fluttershy and use it well
And that's awesome!! Good to know that the website is truly working to my advantage. So I'm glad to have you and thank you very much for reading!
Glad you're looking forward to the sequel as much as I am
(See? I used it well!)
I'm so pleased to see this companion piece. And I love the symmetrical construction -- paragraph for paragraph in the middle section! That's awesome.
Really looking forward to the next part.
Oh, and since you clearly have some talent that is worth developing, here's some advice for the future: You might want to try varying the prose style depending on who's narrating. It's a really fun way to wring more characterisation out of a story.
My god.... Your the king/queen of puns
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I'm definitely trying because voice is important in differentiating each character's POV and just makes a story better as a whole, so I definitely agree with you! Besides that though, thanks for reading - I'm really glad you enjoyed it! 
Thank you very much for the advice
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And yes, I have been hearing this recently - glad you think so! 
I am a queen
Somehow, I missed this sequel. Gotta say, at first, I wasn't terribly keen on this alternate universe where the Dazzlings are apparently a famous girl group, but it has grown on me super fast since the first story. Not only that, but the way you put it together really holds my attention well. Due to several factors (like my suspicions that you are going places and the continuation of this continuity), you have earned yourself a follow. Congrats, and keep up the good work.
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Oh wow, the pressure is on!
Thank you very much, for both the favorites and the watch - it is an honor! I sincerely hope your suspicions are correct and that you'll enjoy what I have in store for the third installment
Ah, just thank you so much!
Ahh, so this is Adagio's POV from the first story. And it is somewhat of an AU! Good, good.
Another beautifully written piece from you. I like how you captured Adagio's canon personality and intent along with the underlying tension. :)
*its
The semicolon should be a colon.
You also have the extra space before your quotation mark in the long description here as well. Otherwise, I found no other errors. Good work!
I'll be following you in anticipation of the third story and more.
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Truly, it's an honor to have such an experienced, well liked and talented author paying attention to my stories! *fangirls into the sunset*
I read and loved both of your comments for the SunDagio series
Really happy that you're anticipating the third installment as well! I'm hopefully going to get the first chapter up soon, which clarifies one of your questions from the first paragraph - this is a complete AU. Rainbow Rocks never happened, though the first EQG movie did!
Thank you for your comments and support and everything!
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Ahhh, that explains it.
And you're quite welcome, my friend!
Thank you for your compliments, and I will be patiently waiting for more of your work. :)
THIS IS A THING. GOD IS REAL.
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I take it you enjoyed? Haha thank you very much Princess, you flatter too much!
GODDAMNIT i just read shes dazzlin and was about to go to sleep but NO... Oh dont you worry ima praise the shimmerin shit out of you!... Heheheh
Gr8 m8 r8 8/8 -IGN. Jesus christ man this has the potential of rivaling Austaeoh -wich is truly a work of art check it out- whitch is basically earth porn on a screen thats how discriptive these stories are and its not info dumped it just has the right amount of words to keep the reader satisfied i will definetly check other stories by you and give them praise but keep up the good work... OH YEAH! I FORGET here
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Haha I loved both of your comments for 'She's Dazzling' and 'She's Shimmering'
great puns btw!Thank you for reading and the compliments - you're too kind
And most importantly, thank you for my mustaches. I will wear them with pride!
Can i expect more sumset sarsaparilla er... I mean sunset shimmer fics (to much fallout
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Yeah! Not just the third installment, but maybe something more in the future sometime!
So it would seem Adagio feels something for Sunset, that's a good sign at least though she obviously doesn't know that Sunset is a pony. I hope Sunset can come to accept her when she finds out she's a siren.
Well, time to read the next story.
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*Spit take* WHAT?!?! There's earth porn!!
5587627 yes and its very... Satisfying
I love it this whole thing, but I have a question... When is this whole thing happening or is it alternate universe kinda thing? I know it doesn't have it labeled as that but i'm curious to when this is happening? Doesn't make it any less amazing if you don't have an explanation. And you deserve these... TAKE THEM!
Ahh Never mind my question I find that in the next "Chapter" (as I am going to put it) Answers my question.
Moar.
If that's okay with you.
This is so short and full of details, and it includes my favorite pairing. So pweash continue when you can, for reading the two AdagioShimmer stories are amazing.
This story could very much be the definition of Adagio's seducing yet predatory-like attitude. Like how an actual siren would be when drawing in their pray with their singing....only for their pray to crash themselves into disaster. Lost forever to the sea itself and it's ravaging, unforgiving tides.
I'm sorry but that line was too good to not make into a historical quote.
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Rule 34: No exceptions.
I have little else but praise for this sophisticated writing style
Chapters would be good, so you don't rush it. And you can post chapter after chapter resting and working your brain muscles in between, making each chapter beautiful; especially for this series.
You can has review!
This was sweet