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" But then I look at her—at Adagio—I look at her and hear her and, god, constellations are bursting, fires are sparking, silence is deafening, the whole world is terrifying and I'm falling, god, I'm falling, I'm falling in love with her. "
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Looks like you were able to put one of my favorite ships in here, thank you. Enjoyed every second of this.
5441713 Thank you so much! for both reading and the watch
It's steadily becoming one of my favorite ships too so I'm happy you enjoyed it
5441722 You're welcome it was no problem at all, keep up the good work because you have a good eye for detail!
Yus, more SunDagio! Bravo, bravo! I like this spin on it, the star and the fan. It's interesting for these two to be in this situation.
5441727 I agree with this. A good story this is, Ellie.
5441952 That's the spirit!
5441946 Thank you very much! Yes, I like this dynamic for these two and I'm glad you agree
5441952 Again, thank you so much!
It means a lot!
This was a wonderful story!
5442337 thanks for the wonderful comment
This right here, this was a beautiful story.
5442543 Well thank you very, very much!
Glad you liked it
SOOO NICELY WRITTEN!
5442834 Aww thank you! Haha
This is amazing
How could this be perfectly written in beauty and grace.
man, i envy you soo badly.
that was magical. Feel proud, you.
... *jaw drops* This writing is brilliant. You weave the words intricately and so well, I'm appalled that this is your first fanfiction. I'm assuming you've written before, because this is beautiful. Typically, I don't like reading in first person, but you did so well, with such a unique pairing, I applaud you good madam. I expect great things from you.
5443156 Thank you very much!!
How could your comment be so nice?
5443196 Haha you're truly too kind!
Thank you so very much - I will feel proud 
5443334
/furiously blushes/
Goodness I don't even know what to say! You're too kind, way too kind. So I offer you my most gracious of thank you's, your Highness
But well and truly, thank you very much for reading and such a thoughtful comment!
Wow... this.... this... this is amazing! Its so detailed, I feel like I'm there. Like I'm her. I feel her emotions, her want and need, her passion and desire. You have talent. Those words are like the Dazzling's songs themselves. They entrance and pull in, leave you wanting more, needing more. Thank you for this gift of words. Just, thank you.
It's short, but I enjoyed reading it. You have a ton of potential as a writer. The prose was well-written and I liked how you managed to make the pairing work. I'm curious to see what kinds of stories you'll write next.
5443512 Why thank you! Hopefully they'll be longer and I most certainly hope they won't disappoint you!
5443518 You're welcome! Keep up the good work!
5443466 Oh my goodness I literally giggled out loud when I read that you are so amazing! What a lovely comment, truly, what a delightful reader
And I'm so glad you enjoyed my story - I can't thank you enough! Gah! You just made my day, thank you
5443544
Your welcome! I hope you write more, your talent for writing is simply amazing.
I love the idea of Adagio and Sunny! Also, yeah, you ain't the only one who noticed that gorgeous thing, Sunny!
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GORGEOUS DAGI IS BEST DAGI
5443581 100% agree - she's such a gorgeous and amazing character!!
Thanks for reading~ I'm glad you enjoyed!
Man. What to say? What to say? Amazing! I give it three woo-hoos!
I mean, the emotions man! I felt like I WAS Sunset, I mean, just wow. Amazing.
Tiny typo I noticed.
In one paragraph, you describe the song ending abruptly, and you spell 'abrupt' 'abrubt.'
Other than that, it was fantastic!!
Props to you. :3
5443726 Okay that is very embarrassing haha~!
And thank you so very much, kind soul
5443732
No problem! Glad I could help.
Other than that tiny thing, it was a very nice single-chapter story.
5443715 Three woohoo's? Such an honor!
And I'm glad you really enjoyed the story, thank you so much
I really liked it! I just wish there was a sequel...
Pretty please?...5443847 Awww, why thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it!
...and perhaps there could be?I stared.
My jaw dropped.
And then, I began clapping.
In other words... This was amazing. I may not ship Sunset Shimmer and Adagio, but... this was amazing. It was very descriptive, very enticing, beautifully written in such a way I could never hope or even dream to accomplish. It was truly magical. It was...
Dazzling.
5444279
I stared.
My jaw dropped.
And then, I began clapping.
That was a truly wonderful comment! I'm glad that even though you don't ship them, you gave my story a chance and even ended up liking it!
Thank you very much! Your comment was...
Dazzling.
I rather fancy what you've done here. It's surprisingly short, but that's not a bad thing. I would have liked to read more, but that might be why it works so well.
I came for the SunDagio, but ... damn that is some good prose. I'm looking forward to whatever you have to write next, whether it has Adagio or not.
5445038 Well, thank you
Yeah I wasn't sure about the minimalist approach, and am possibly considering a sequel, but I'm not sure if that would dash the magic of the story haha
5445737 SunDagio is a wonderful thing to come for!
So thank you very much for reading, enjoying and the watch
I hope I do not disappoint 
5446251
It's good the way it is. It's unique. That's why it stands out. But if you felt so inclined, why not write a story that focused on the same pairing but occupied a different canon?
I don't follow fan fiction anymore, but while I'm still here, I'd be willing to beta read for you.
5443581 Adagio's hips are a gift from Horse God.
5450197 Glad you enjoyed it
again5450406 Did I comment before?
5450406 I did. Sorry, my mind's forgetful.
5450432 Yes
Right here;
5442543
5450437 Yep, d**n my mind. Sorry.
5450443 Don't be! You obviously liked it and I really appreciate that