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Sky Ice have finally gathered up the courage to ask his marefriend, Silver Stream, to marry him.
But when Silver tells him something that he'd never think of her. Can his love for who she is overcome the obstacle that is ahead of him?
Because true love never dies, right?
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Awww. What a sweet story.
5450855 Thank you ^^
5450940 Thank you, and I'll fix that error immediately...
5453566 care to point but out then?
(If it was about obstacle that is ahead of HIM, I used him because I thought Silver already had moved past that thing)
5454356 Thank you ^^
5454857 ...
...
I know next to nothing about grammar... okay? (heh, I'll fix that now
)
5454905 ;3 Thank you for the help.
i know you said that there are some errors somewhere in your story, but i didn't find any while reading it. eh, oh well. other than that, it was a lovely story.
Shit, did they finish that lasagna?
Oh wait, they did?
Okay. This is a good story then.
TURN UP
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5465737 ... Did I write a story on my phone without grammar errors???
And thank you for the kind words
5466066 you decided if the story was good or not based on if they did or did not finish the spinach-lasagna?
And the picture didn't work...
(Also, thank you for the feedback
)
5466496 The picture did work. Just maybe not for you.
And fret not! The spinach lasagna was a very big part of the story for me.
5467537 Glad to hear that ^^ (And the picture worked for me now)
5466489
you shouldn't doubt what a phone could do. most of them have good spelling powers in them. and you are welcome.
Thank you for this story. It was really wonderful.
5473334 Thank you for the feedback
Well that's, something, I'm not to sure how to feel about this.
But I give you a like non the less.
5589133 well, mission accomplished then, I guess...
My main goal was to make just stop and think... Which I seem to have done here
5610887 Thank you
Wait, why? xD
5611082 I actually made someone cry with a story?
*takes of nerd-glasses* awesome.
5611120 Well, sorry about that, I guess... at least you know to not do the same in the future...
Anyways, glad that you liked the story
Touching. I don't want to be in sky ice's shoes.. i don't know if i can handle it.
5613384 thank you :twlightsmile:
Eh, you will most likely not find yourself in a situation like this. So don't worry.
5613589 As someone who is in exact that situation (actually an even more complicated one, but won't go into details here) I can only say I'm glad I'm not just attracted to one gender, or else I would probably have a broken heart by now.
While the person I apparently originally fell in love with is
disappearingchanging a lot, I will hope that it will not be too much to drive us apart, and that I maybe even get to fall into love with the same person a second time again, and who wouldn't want to do that?5909439 Well, I hope you two will be able to stick together, then. Best of luck!
5911420 Yeah, it's gonna be complicated, though. Thanks
Nice story very hearthwarming
I didn't really look for mistakes but I did notice this:
“You've been there for me when I needed you, and for that I will always be great full.”
That is supposed to be 'grateful'
5961418 ... Well, I wrote this on a phone xD can't get it perfect :P
I'm happy that you enjoyed the story, though
despite the 'lack of knowledge'