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I'm serious, I was just going to the party to have a good time, meet some friends, have good food or just talk.
And I did, what I didn't expect was to wake up on the hooves of my crush, but I did.
I didn't expect to be making her a cup of coffee either, but I did.
And I never expected my crush to never even thinking about kissing me, but she did.
If you find any grammar errors, feel free to point them out.
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I liked it. Even without proofread it is pretty well written!
5588227 Thank you
It feels like this got mistaken for a self-insert... If anything would be a self-insert here, it'd be the mare xD
5588871 You made me realize something.
I'm making a romantic story between Luna and my OC. Fun thing, I'm actually narrating from Luna's perspective.
Narcissism? Maybe...
I don't really know what to make out of that...
5588891 as long as you don't mention that it's your OC, you should be fine...
And I am not quite sure what to make of that either xD
5588901 Uh, my user name is also my OC's so... Yeah. Hehe....
Anyways. Great story again, keep them up!
5588908 well, as long as your OC won't be flawless it should be alright I guess...
Again, thank you.
Well I enjoyed that.
Good story good sir.
And who is the one who down voted this?
5589072 idk... Someone who assumed that it was a self insert maybe? *shrugs*
5589061 Thank you
Wow.
5596708 a good or a bad 'wow'? xD
5596761 Good wow.
Cool story, Bro!
5598289 Thank you
5598695 I'm glad you did this Wacky, it turned out to be pretty good. Especially the ending, I wasn't expecting that.
5611823 Thank you :twlightsmile:
Well, I did my best to write it within three days, (took the story down for a day when it had 0 likes and 1 dislike, that changed xD)
I had the ending planned, maybe I didn't write as much as I wanted, but it turned out well in the end.
(Yay, I now have three nicknames)
That's pretty cute,
A few things to point out...
You used cent instead of scent.
In 'do seven P.M..' do should be does.
There is a moment where you wrote ainti-blush, it should be anti-blush. :)
*rolls into the sunset*
5740998
I didn't proofread, alright?
I am a bit surprised over the scent, because I usually pay better attention to my writing. Though, I probably would've missed 'does' I'll fix that right away, actually...
Thank you for the feedback
5741013 :P No worries. There is always at least one that gets away. :P
5741016 Yeah xD
I also have next to no knowledge about English grammar... so I'm surprised you didn't correct that xD
5741021 That's also a challenge, but no worries there either. Things were pretty understandable. :)
5741229 Good xD
My grammar may not be perfect, but it's at least not terrible...
A fun and quick little read. I rather enjoyed it.
Probably a little late on the comment but ^that^ was the only error I could find.
5799522 Thanks, I'll fix that soon ^_^ (I did add an extra part without spell-check if I remember correctly)
Thank you for the feedback
hehe XD brilliant XD
5936711 Thank you
5938124 ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!
5939413 Unfortunately, I am currently working on other projects. Though, I could maybe plan a short sequel
5939419 yeah :D
5939448 I can't promise anything, though. I do want to finish a few more things first
5939492 take your time :)
My parents thought
7444293
I'll look into that when I have acces to a computer again, and if I remember.
Thanks for pointing it out! <3
7444369
Eyup