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While the memories are nice & fluffy, this story needs some pretty serious editing for grammar, and all of the erotic scenes felt glossed over to the point where they may as well have been omitted (one of them even was simply omitted).
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...So...the story gave you a seizure???
5422832 No, my various reactions in order were: What The Heck? Oh. WTF IS THIS? Awesome. WHY THE WHAT? Hello.... Whut? Ok, I'm lost. Its gonna be awesome! Er... SERIOUSLY. Oops? Oh well, good story. Ok, maybe I was wrong. Nurp :3 I was right. Yay!
Five mustaches.
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If you'd be interested whenever you have the free time, I could pm you a link. I'll admit 3 somes are something I'm new at, I'm usually better at one on one. But I thought I'd give TwiLunEstia a go
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Thanks for the mustaches.
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Don't forget five yays! :D
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Here have a candy cane.
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Luna duckface!
Unfortunate downvote for poor storytelling and no visible editing. PM me if this ever gets edited and I'll reverse it.
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Thank you for letting me know the reason for the down vote, but in the long description I said no editors worked on it
. But I promise to PM you when I can get an editor to polish it up, and I put out the re-write.
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Hey! I noticed that your getting downvotes because of the lack of editing. And i LOVE the story so i would like to offer my editing services to you. If you do take me as an editor, i would like you to know that i'm a bit nitpicky and a Grammar Nazi. I do understand if you want to keep it this way because its been like a year after it was published! So, yeah!
Great story. Are you going to make a sequel to continue this story? You can go a lot further with it. I think this will make a great series.
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Honestly I don't know. IRL's been insane, and I'm already wrapped up on continuing two other fics in a series I made. But someday? I might. It all depends on if I can get back into a good writing groove, once IRL gets back to being less hectic.