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Yep, that was pretty good my friend. A bit of a surprise, for sure, but a welcomed one indeed. :D

5392678 Oh it will get darker... much darker. You have not seen the worst that my deeply disturbed mind or my partners mind, for that matter, can come up with.

6347979 It's being edited by my partner. I'm hoping that it will be posted by Tuesday.

so what really happen to rarity and who is this Besity?

6373668 Besity is Rarity's corrupted form, just like Blood Rose is Fluttershy's.

6375738 oh ok so how did rarity turn into besity in the first place?

6375784 Corrupted by changelings, or something like that.

6381295 ok can you make a side chapter of rarity corruption for everybody to know what really happen.

6382339 I don't know about that. Right now, we rather move on with our plotline, which is about to get even more dangerous and bizarre.

6383957 Without spoiling it, there will be more corruption.

6390059 it ok so who going to be corrupt next?

6390137 There are 5 more to be corrupted. I don't wanna give anything away, but it will surprise you.

6375784
Do not fret, PileRow666.

Most of the possible unanswered questions from chapter 4 will likely be explained in the next chapter. The characters have had a bit too much going on to take a break and get them answered themselves. XD I don't know if you noticed, but Discord seems to know a bit about what's going on with those two newly spawned characters. Perhaps HE could be the one to reveal those answers. 8D

Stay tuned to find out and thank you for your interest in our fanfic!

Urmi Charpstin

Thanks for your hard work on another chapter, partner. ^_^

To readers who were expecting some questionnings from pervious chapters to be answered in Chapter 5, we apologize as our most recent chapter has been used in order to fill a time gap concerning other key characters and elements, as well as further developement on them.

Chapter 6, we hope, will be able to join the scattered protagonists and answer some pending questions as most as possible.

Furthermore, a re-editing of our previous chapters is in progress, in order to offer a more grammatically correct experience for our readers. We are working hard on trying to improve our abilities as writers throughout this project.

Thank you very much for your patience and support. It is most appreciated.

Have a very jolly day!

Urmi Charpstin, faithful butler and co-author of Chrystal Corruption.

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