Pinkie Pie goes to her favoritest of all favorite places: Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. There are tons of fun things to do there, like play with the Toys, mess around with Mangle, go ham in Prize Corner, buy balloons from BB, bounce into the Parts/Service to say hi to some strange animatronics, and get a job as a watchpony! What could go wrong?
First story! Hooray!
Picture courtesy of Darkheart_Reads
Reading by Gazer:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WKFHDXt0nGk
Interesting. I will watch for more.
5395300 Thanks you!
5395379 No problem, it's my pleasure. I really will be waiting, so yah.
Well. For once I might actually feel sorry for the animatronics.
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Added to the Five Night's at Freddy's group.
Very well written!
You wrote Pinkie Pie exactly the way she would react in this situation, andis very true to her character!
I sense much potential in this one. I will be keeping an eye on it.
Looks kinda like Metal-Kitty's style on the cover. I dunno, he blocked me after I compared a lot of the tropes in his MLP Project comic to Naruto instead of something less mainstream and then had the audacity to say the comic was getting a bit boring and drawn out like the aforementioned manga, so I'm not inclined to check.
Anyway, I really like the concept. Good going.
At first, I thought this would be a train wreck. But after Pinkie's chat with Balloon Boy, I realized that this was gonna be good.
"Employees don't get balloons."
I felt my heart sink at the thought of that demented boy robot saying that in that cold robot voice.
HOLY COW! REALLY PONIES! IT'S JUST THE PROLOUGE! Is that how you spell prolouge? IDK.
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Thanks you so muches! Yes. Muches. It works
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Thanks you? Train Wreck? Did that mean it was terrible before until BB, or was it just mediocre, and I have no idea what I'm talking about anymore ONTO THE NEXT COMMENT!
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Thanks for the info. Will use to update and stuffins.
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I shall go and take my non-existent top-hat off to him!
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"Did that mean it was terrible before until BB, or was it just mediocre"
No, not at all! I just saw the title and assumed it would be bad, since I didn't think the worlds of MLP and FNAF would mesh properly. Then I started reading it and, slowly but surely, I began to like this crossover. It was only when BB was introduced that I knew for sure that this was gonna be a great story.
Hmm round all good but I feel I should make a comment here about Kyocera I agree with her I think you also should go and edit this chapter try and explain what ballon boy's voice sounded like explain how ragged down the old anamatronics were and for future chapters try and make it detailed like "Pinkie checked around the cameras and heard faint footsteps" you know
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I have done some editions lately, but you probably read the editions, which means I failed at describing yet again. I am really bad when it comes to describing stuffins! :3
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Glad to hear it. Yes, the title is cheesy on purpose!
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They are being made currently.
Hey, if anyone can find a better picture, please show me it! Don't get me wrong, the current pic is awesome, it's just that this is a fanfic for FNAF 2, and that is a FNAF 1 picture. Thanxz!
Well, not bad for a start. I reserve judgement til I read more
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Good idea! This is just the prolouge after all. Prolouge? Prologe? IDK
Just mores chapters more chapters garrug I can't get enough of this story
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Yay! I'm guessing that is good!
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I do not accept hate mail unless it is in a haiku or in Shakespearean English. If it is not in any of those, than you are not smart enough to hate on my fanfic.
if your going to write
a comedy about a horror game then \
you will need voices
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I assumed I did. IDK. Everyone has a different opinion and they are all titled to them!
But what did you mean by voices? Like dialogue or something else?
it...HAS ARRIVED! HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA *eye twitches* IT HAS COME!
10/10
5402940 Trust me. Pinkie & killer robos don't mix well. And thats what makes this funneh!
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Thanks you!
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Precisely why I did it. This is going to be ridiculous to the extreme!
5402956 Although i wonder. Can robots have sanity? and if they do, will it be intact after all of this?
yeah llike dialoge for pretty much all of the freddy characters
5402985 Wouldn't be much of a comedy if Pinkie's spirit was crushed now would it? It's true that alot of this doesn't make any sense whatsoever, but in my opinion a story like this is a blessing for me. I've read many stories in the past year or two and its nice to see a story that takes something that give people nightmares and turning it into a random, comedic story. A lot of the stories i've read are either poorly written or were cancelled due to "reasons". And a lot of the FNAF comedies i've attempted to read had.... well lets just say semi necrophilia and leave it at that. I respect your opinion, That is all.
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Understood. This was labeled comedy for a reason. As I said before, there probably should be a random label up there too. We are all entitled to our opinions, and thank you for being honest here.
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I've been thinking. When FNwP 2 comes around, the silly Pinkie Pie thing will get old. So I was thinking that maybe it will be more dark, and possibly have Applejack, Twilight Sparkle, or Rainbow Dash mixed in. Don't worry. You will get your creepy factor!
there had better not be twilight killer motive in this i mean it would be funny yet unavoidable
So funny how Pinkie outsmarts the animatronics without realizing it. She's such a fun pony and you've portrayed her character accurately, TV.
That was just hilarious.. yet considering who we're talkin here.. completely possible too
Hey, moar comments! Let me see here...
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Not quite sure what you are asking here. If you are asking weather (sea what eye did their?) TS will go nuts at SATAN'S SPAWN, then no. PP might get a smidgen mad tho... Hehehe...
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Thanks you!
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Thanks for the input! Next night will be longer I promise... which also means some crazy Pinkie Pie crap is gonna go down!
Well that was interesting. Why am I not surprised that Pinkie outsmarted them?
Cant wait for the next~
Stole my story idea! Good story though.
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Because Pinkie Pie is awesome.
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Hooray, I am being slightly paid attention to! Don't worry, the next chapter is almost out.
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WAIT! AM I A THIEF NOW? THE POLICE WILL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!
I don't think that the puppet would mop. Ever.
That funny at the end
Wonder what other tricks pinkie has up her hoof
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It does make for an interesting mental picture doesn't it?
>>Allen Vth
That was sort of what I was aiming for. A FNaF MLP crossover that wasn't unnecessarily silly, nor just plain creepy and dark. You know what, I take the unnecessarily silly part back. There are a lot of unnecessarily silly parts! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Who knows...?
>>sonicrainboomdash
Glad you liked it!
Very interesting.