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Okay, so their debut Cutie Mark Crusaders song didn't go as planned. Nothing did, and the three barely avoided becoming the laughingstock of Ponyville. Now, a year later, its talent show time again, and this time they're ready.

This time they're going to rock it.

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SudokuBrony #1 · Nov 13th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This has to be a real brony song! Somebody make this parody a reality, please! BlackGryphon and Michelle Creber only sang the original so don't say that was a parody.

lunabrony #2 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fLgrKCtFz24 Michelle already did that with pretty much every pony VA ever

gamexpert1990 #3 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

Although I agree with the sentiment, the "recording device" section just seems like it was tacked on.

You still get an upvote, though.

lunabrony #4 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

5263750 Agreed. Taking it out right now. Thanks for your input!

Neko Majin C #5 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

"They're gonna miss it, and ah ain't never known Dash to be late to anythin' what had Scootaloo involved with it."

It physically hurt me to read this line. However, it is Applejack's dialogue and idiolect, so it is okay.

...hopping scotch and jumping rope until we hurt our knees. We tried taming hawks...

Extra space.

I have to admit, that was almost as good as this.

Not quite on par, but very close. Well done.

KBO.

gamexpert1990 #6 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

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Just thought I would let you know about a little problem that popped up after removing that section:

"Nailed it?" Sweetie Belle asked.
"That's the question, I suppose," Sweetie Belle said."

Sorry to trouble you...

lunabrony #7 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

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Fixed

Jman14102 #8 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

Bravo! Very creative!

ShadowLDrago #9 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

Very nice.

SudokuBrony #10 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

5263705 Crap! I forgot about that!

Raichu

Raichu #11 · Nov 28th, 2014 · · ·

Great job. Nice cliffhanger too, though I'm sure only Sweetie Belle got her cutie mark in this one.

Deathm0nger #12 · Jan 1st, 2015 · · ·

I kinda want to know who down voted this story. Still a good story to read after waking up!

insolentboi #13 · May 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

O.o
Don't know whether to make a Michael Jackson reference or a Weird Al reference

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