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“Come on Twilight, you need to get up.”
“Just five more minutes Spike.”
“Did you stay up all night studying again? You know that the Princess will teach you the spells, you don’t have study the night before. She tells you to study after she teaches you the basics of the spell.” Spike said.
Twilight looked up from the book she had fallen asleep on and wiped the drool from her muzzle, a mortified look on her face noticing there was drool on the book as well. She quickly cleaned the spot. “Yes I know, but there are so many ways to teleport. For example, one way to teleport is to make a hole in reality where you are and the place you are going. It only lasts for a split second, but the hole surrounds you and puts you were the exit is. It’s a weird concept and I don’t fully understand it but it looks like it could work fairly well. There’s also a way that rips your atoms apart and then reconstructs them in the area you are wanting to go. It seems painful and I’m not sure I want to try it, but it happens in an instant. There are just so many ways to teleport and I need to know them all so that I don’t disappoint the Princess.”
Spike shook his head and moved some books out of the way so that he could put their breakfast on the table. Just like Twilight to study something even though she’s gonna be taught it the next day. Spike thought.”Well, here’s breakfast. We should hurry since you’re supposed to learn how to teleport today.”
Spike and Twilight quickly ate their breakfast and headed towards Princess Celestia's room. As they walked they talked about what might happen while Twilight was being taught teleportation.
“So, what kind of teleportation do you think the Princess will teach you Twilight?” Spike asked.
“I’m not really sure actually. It could be the one where you deconstruct and then reconstruct in an area, or just making a hole like the one I told you about earlier. I trust the Princess to teach me one that she knows I can do. ” Twilight said.
As they reached Celestia's room Twilight and Spike finished their conversation. A couple of guards were stationed outside the doorway and let them pass seeing that it was only Celestia's prized pupil and her baby dragon.
Inside the room there was an ornate bookcase filled with books. Next to that was a small statue of Starswirl, but it didn't have his hat or cape. On the other side of the room was vanity table with Celestia's regalia sitting on it, waiting to be worn. On the walls were several paintings of the major events in Equestrian's history, and a small picture of a dark blue unicorn that seemed out of place but when questioned about it Celestia would quickly change the subject. In the center of the room was a table with an incomplete game of chess sitting on it. Finally, on the opposite side of the door, was Celestia sitting on her bed with a half-read book floating nearby.
“Good morning, Twilight. Judging from the bags under your eyes I see that you stayed up late last night. I take it you were studying?” Celestia said.
“Yeah she did. I found her sleeping on a book, she was even drooling a little.” Spike said. Twilight gave Spike a glare so cold he was sure a sheen of ice was forming on his scales. He even looked at them to make sure.
“Did you have to tell her I was drooling? Really?” Twilight hissed.
“No, but I’m starting to regret saying it.” Spike said.
Celestia couldn’t help but let a small grin break through at the two’s antics. They were like a brother and sister; arguing, embarrassing each other, and generally being siblings. “Twilight, are you ready to begin your lesson in teleportation?”
Twilight stopped glaring at Spike and looked at Celestia. “Yes, Princess. I am.”
“Good, let’s go to the garden then shall we?” Celestia said. With that they left for the Royal Gardens to begin Twilight’s training in teleportation.
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To say it was a garden would be an understatement, it was more of a small forest than anything else. It had flowers, trees, and shrubbery from all over the world, able to grow here because of her wonderful gardener who knew how to make any plant under his care flourish. It also helped that he was a unicorn who specialized in plant magic but that was beside the point. It was a quiet place and only those who had permission from Celestia or her guard could enter, so it was the ideal place for Twilight to learn teleportation.
“Alright, what is the first and most important thing about teleportation, Twilight?” Celestia asked.
“The first and most important thing about teleportation is to have the starting destination and end destination you wish to go clearly envisioned. You must also be absolutely sure you will not teleport into anypony or anything, therefore you must teleport yourself at least a few centimeters above the ground so as not to have teleported your hooves into the ground.” Twilight’s face grew into a giant grin as she finished, quite satisfied that she had completely answered the question.
“Very good Twilight. Now what is the next thing that must be done when using teleportation?”
“The second most important thing about teleportation is to stabilize the amount of energy being used for the teleportation. This is because the amount of energy that would be needed to move that distance will be used. For example, if you wanted to teleport two meters to the left and you used enough energy to move three meters, you would move three meters instead.” Twilight’s smile widened having answered another question fully and correctly.
Celestia couldn’t help but smile at her student’s eagerness to answer, “Very good. Now from what I heard Spike say you were up all night studying. Can you show me what you learned from the books I sent you?”
“You bet! Er, yes, Princess.” Twilight said, embarrassed.
Twilight’s face scrunched in concentration as she focused her magic into her horn. She stayed like that for several moments before she collapsed to the floor and looked at Celestia in horror.
“What happened?! I did exactly what the books said and it didn’t work! Why didn’t it work Princess?!”
“Oh, Twilight. Just because you study something doesn’t mean you’ll get it right on the first try. For something like this you have to practice it before you can get it right.”
Twilight’s ears drooped and she hung her head low, “I’m sorry that I disappointed you Princess.”
Celestia smiled and put her hoof to Twilight’s chin, “Twilight, I’m not disappointed in you. I’ll never be disappointed in you, my dear student. You always try your hardest and you have never let me down before. Just because you fai- ... didn’t do it your first try doesn’t mean you won’t ever be able to do it. Some things just take time to do. I know you’ll master this quickly and easily once you set your mind to it.”
Twilight’s ears perked up and she straightened her stance. “Yes Princess, I will master this. You won’t be disappointed.”
“That’s good to hear, Twilight. Now, since you studied all night and already know the basics I’ll leave you to it yourself. Have Spike help you too, and listen to what he tells you. He has a good eye for knowing when you’re at your limit and I don’t want you collapsing from magical exhaustion.”
Twilight let out a nervous laugh, “Yes, Princess. I will.”
Celestia stood up and started to walk out of the garden when she noticed that Twilight was still sitting in the same spot. She couldn't help but let a small smile cross her muzzle, “You may leave now, Twilight.”
“R-right. Sorry Princess.” Twilight said.
Celestia chuckled, “It’s fine Twilight. I’ll see you next week to see how far you've come on teleportation.”
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I don't know dude, seems very unfinished.
Too tired to look for more but here are the spelling mistakes i noticed at a glance
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Get an editor dude, it will help you lot
Can't wait to see what sort of mishaps Twilight will get herself into trying to learn how to teleport. Teleportation in general seems like the kind of thing were, if you get so much as one tiny detail wrong, it can have very big consequences.
Interesting, I'd like to see how you break down the spell into its component parts.
Needs AU Tag, and here's why:
Twilight didn't know Celestia had a sister. It was a thing that from the sounds of the show very, very, few ponies knew about. And one of them Twilight Sparkle and Co.
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A blank flanked Earth Pony, Mr. Greenhooves. That's the gardener of Celestia's Garden.
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Even for an AU fic. This was pretty cute.
With the amount of http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Teleportation_in_fiction I'm sure that their'll be some rather interesting modes of travel young Twilight will try out. Although the show only showed Wormholes (Ala Past-Future interaction freakout. Timeswirl shenanigans, and Cake Twin shenanigans.) and Matter Transmission (Or was it Intra dimensional travel?).
5251429 There's no evidence that proves such a thing, and there's also no evidence that disproves such a thing,
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What are you talking about. If AU. I gave proof. If about a proof given, I'll debate you with it to prove my point. Although the "some ponies knew" I'll admit that's fanon / plot device in some fics. But no pony knew of Luna, Nightmare Moon as anything other than a fairy tale, and even then the tale said Unicorn. Not Alicorn.
5252903 Do you remember everything from your childhood classroom? Probably not. Even the most intelligent people probably can't remember all the details about places. Not to mention, Twilight is likely so absorbed in her studies that she wouldn't notice a potrait of Luna unless it was staring right at her and she didn't have her nose stuck in a book.
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And here's where you're wrong.
Not just anyold class room. This was Celestia's personal room. A room she visited numerous times. She entered that room without a book. Had from fillyhood, to young marehood. Spending countless days and hours in that room. Has an intensive knowledge of history. And consumes knowledge like it was a drug. There's no way that she wouldn't know about that. Or remember it. Since she was taught by Celestia, practically lived with Celestia, and was closer to her than most non-students.
Important parts of history. Luna standing out from the rest. There is no way an OCD, bibliophile wouldn't want to know everything about that room. And there's no way that Twilight would forget. If only do to repitition, being in that place for a long chunk of her life. And the writer didn't need to put Luna.
Since by awcknowledging Luna as an important part of history. So much so that she stands out. Maids would see and learn about her, majordomo's staff, and the like would know who Luna is, and Twilight would know that NMM wasn't a ghost that ate children.Or a fairy tale monster.
5253866 Do we know for certain if Twilight knows they are Luna, or if Twilight knows who Luna truly is? For all we know, she may have asked Celestia about her, and Celestia could've lied to her. Considering Twilight thought that Nightmare Moon was just an old fairytale, and is very trusting of Celestia, it is quite possible that Celestia told her a lie akin to what Obi-Wan told Luke about who Darth Vader was. A sort of half truth if you will.
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Again. This is an AU. For both that, and the gardener.
And no. She knows who Luna is. Again. IMPORTANT moments in history. If Luna in this Verse wasn't important part of historical moments. And wasn't Known by Twilight. Then it wouln't have been mentioned.
Then add onto the fact that Twilight still didn't know Celestia had a sister, or who Luna was when she was cleansed. It was a surprise. That surprise wouldn't be thre if Twilight knew her picture. Saw her face almost everyday she did her lessons or slept with Tia when she needed comfort / was scared as a little filly. Or was told aout that picture of another Alicorn when that question inevitably would arrise.
And if Celestia did lie. Twilight would've been angry and fe;t betrayed. Instead her temporary anger/cofusion came from her misreading Celestia's reply. She wouldn't be surprised by Celestia havng a sister, or Luna's appearance, or even not knowing abut that Alicorn. if that Alicorn picture wasn't there.
That and again. The Gardener of Celestia's Garden is an Earth Pony named Mr.Greenhooves. It's canon.
So yes. This is without a doubt an AU.
5254188 We have no way to know for certain that Twilight knows who Luna is. And it's quite possible that she would forget a detail as seemingly miniscule at the time as Celestia had a sister. Remember, "Luna Eclipsed" seemed to suggest that nopony outside of Celestia knew who Luna was. And as for the gardener, perhaps this is before Mr. Greenhooves was employed as the groundskeeper. We know he was groundskeeper for The Grand Galloping Gala, but we don't know for how long prior to that he was working.
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Near retirement age, probably for a while. Anyways. As I said. AU. Of course M!Verse Celestia worked on erasing every bit of knowledge of Luna from the world. But you're being willfully ignorant to say that a pony can see a picture constantly. Get to know about it. And not either put two and two together. It being noted as an important part of history = nopony InVerse knows about it. And that Celestia who i=in M!Verse went to great lengths to erase Luna and the truth of NMMfrom history. Would leave out in the open a Picture of Luna where any and everypony could see it who entered her room.
The Author could've had used anything else, not mentioned Luna. OR the gardener's race. And this would fit in FimVerse / M!Verse. But by adding those two details made this an AUtagged Fic. There's no way around that point. Without Luna pic [where Staff, Students, and rare guests could see it out in the open. Along side other moments of impotant events], and without nameing the gardener's race simply stating he was good with plants. This would've been fit with the main timeline. Those two things in the fic make it AU.